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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
The last tear
He found ourselves in a big chamber who seemed like an ancinet estructure buried on the ground, 4 columns were holding the roof who just desplomated, in the middle of the room, there was a little entrance, the only one in that room
We slowly aproached to it, when we standed our foots on the entrance, several torches turned on by their own and illuminated a big passage in wich the walls, the floor and the roof were maded by crystals with strange symbols on them, I couldn't understand them
"Jasper, You know what are those symbols?" I asked pointing at one of the glasses, Jasper got close to them and after some minutes he told me
"They are ancient Latin, Prays, Lot's of prays" He standed up and looked at the ones on the roof
"This crystals are... walls of security... security against Slaves!"
"Yes Vivio! You see? The prays? The slaves can't break this walls, don't even damage them! This passage was maded to make sure that the slaves follow this path... to some kind of ritual!"
"If they can't break them..." I said "Then I have an idea" I grabed my knife and aproachet to one of the walls, this walls were maded of several glasses of something like 1.5x2 meters each one, all them putted one after anoither, I putted my knife between two glasses and started to push one out (It wasn't easy of course)
"Now we have a shield against slaves!" I said while Placing the glass in front of us, Jasper just giggled
We started to walk, following the path of this chambers,pushing the glass in front of us, there track was long, after 30 minutes, Jasper told me
"I'm sorry Vivio"
We stoped for a moment
"For what?" I asked, althoug I alredy knew what
"For what I told you on the ship... it wasn't... right, you choised to stay with the Vatican Knights because... because we are a family, a big family... I couldn't understand that... until now" A great sensation of happynes filled my heart, I aproached to him and kisseh him in his check
"Family and friends for always?" I asked him
"For always" He answered
We keeped our way but in a corner we stoped
At the end of the room, looking at us, Hammer of Hate,m slowly aproaching at us
"No... go back. Go back!" I said to Jasper
"No" He said "Now I know what to do"
Before I coulddo something to stop him, Jasper get out of the security of the glass and pushed it against me, pigeonholing me between the two walls,forming some kind of triangle who protected me, but not him, there was only room for one
"Jasper! No! What are you doing?!" I said hitting the glass, Jasper placed his hand on it
"I'm protecting my family, Vivio" I inmediatly understand what he was going to do, he was going to sacrificate himself!
"No! No! NO!" I keeped screaming while tring to push the glass away, but Jasper had stucked it
"Listen to me Vivio. Karil is still alive, I just know it, she needs you! Saver her, save her and take her away from all of this!"
"Jasper! Please, No!" I started to cry, he placed his hand on the glass
"Thanks for all Vivio, please, Never forgive me" Hammer of Hate keeped aproaching "I will salute Alphonse, Helga and Pink from your part" He turned and pulled out his gun
"Hey! You are nothing more but a pile of Shit!" He screamed to the slave who was now just in front of him
Jasper raised his gun but before he could fire, Hammer of Hate swinged his hammer with strenght, Jasper evade it but the space was to small, he was in disventage,Hammer of Hate attacked again, and again, and again, Jasper evade the attacks but he wasn't going to resist, finally,the slave succeded in his attack, the hammer hitted Jasper's left arm, I could hear how his bone was pulverisated by the hit, Jasper screamed, I feeledso impotent, I was screaming, cring, hitting the glass, but with no succes, Hammer of Hate attached again, this time the weaponb smashed Jasper's face, I'm sure his jaw was fracturated, he falled over his only good arm, another smash,this one in his back, Jasper hited the ground, the slave waskilling him, he was killing Jasper and there was nothing I could do
Another figure appeared, in front of Jasper, I slowly raised my head to see who was he, Abomination, he was in front of Jasper, laughing, coward, coward!
He grabed Jasper with his dam rooted hands and started to smash him against the walls, the roof and the floor, again and again, the glasses were been stained with the red of Jasper's blood
"Leave him! Leave him coward!" I was screaming, Abomination was killing him slowly, so I could see, bastard, he was a bastard!
Abomination stoped for a second, he raised Jasper, he was still breathing, covered with his own blood, then Abomination slowly rised the blade attached to his arm and putted it in Jasper's waist, I knew what we was going to do
"NOOOOOO!!!!!" I screameddesperated,uable to stoped that slash,Abomination cutted Jasper in two. Hislegs falled first, the Abomination throwed the other hafl alredy dead, he killed Jasper in fron of me, he wanted meto see, he wanted me to suffer again, seing how I was unable to save my friend, Abomination keeped laughing watching at the rests of Jasper, after somesecondsd he told to me
"I THINK YOU NEED SOME TIME ALONE WITH YOUR THOUGHS" Then he and Hammer of Hate turned into black mists and gone at hing speedfollowing the path of this passage, I entered in a state of shock, I don't remeber nothing in the next 30 minutes, after this, I kicked the glass several times until I finally launched it away, still cring I huged the corpse of Jasper
"Jasper... why? WHY?! Look what they did to you... " I petted his checks, he was cold, he was silent, hewas dead, the first Alphonse, then Helga, then Pink and now Jasper, all my family had disapeared... and there was only one guilty...
I slowly placed the corpse of Jasper on the floor, there was nothing I could do for him now, I just kissed him once more and leave him there, forgive me Jasper, forgive me for not giving you a propry burial
I started to run, following the path of this glasses, my heart was full of wrath, full of hate, full of vengance, I wanted to kill her, I wanted to make her suffer the same pain my friends suffered,I wanted to saw her begin, I wanted to kill Nanoha with my own hands!
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