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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
I hited a dusted floor, in a normal state, the fall shall probably killed me, but "thanks" to my curse, I standed up without a scratch, the place was totally sucked in darkness, but somehow, I was able to see through it, yes, the curse was making his job very well
I found several skelletons and some kind of tombs, I was in some kind of ancient catacombs, I felt that something falled behind me, I turned and saw tyhe headless corpse of the priest who was tring to help me, also, in that instant I heared the voice of Edmund Testarrosa, at first I though it was coming from upahead, but truly, I was hearing his voice inside my head
"You are now a Slave of the Dark" He said "Time to have you'r first meal, saciate your hunger with the corpse of that man, don't resist, it's just matter of time" I looked at the corpse and I must admit, it looked... tasty, I slowly aproached to it and opened my mouth showing my razor sharp fangs, I was so hunger, I just wanted to eat, but then I stoped
"I... wil not... be a Slave" I quickly turned back and started to walk in the oposite direction of the corpse
"You are strong, but as I said, it's just matter of time, you are cursed, every single second that pass, takes you one more step to the darkness" Edmund said
"Shut up!" I screamed and keeped walking without been sure of wich way I was going,suddenly the walls exploted and several undead outlaws spawned attacking me inmediatly, I killed them all quickly
"It's wonderfull. Don't?" Edmund said "This feeling of masacre, finishing lives with you'r own hands, hear how they beg, feel thei'r blood stained in your face... you are truly enjoing it"
"Shut your mouth!" I screamed "I hate this! I hate every single day of my life! I never asked to be a Vatican Knight! I just wanted to live happily with my friends! But you... you and that Nanoha! You both destroyed my life! You toke away from the the beings I loved! I hate you! I hate you with all my strenght!!!"
Aheda of me appeared some Undead Bandidos pointing thei'r shootguns against me, I inmediatly jumped over them swinging my Axe and slashing them
"We? Ha, ha... Vivio, you should hate yourself for the things that had happened in your live" Edmund said, I finished slaing the last bandido and answered him
"Very simple Vivio, If Alphonse, Helga, Pink and Jasper are dead, it's because your fault, because you were to weak to protec them"
"No... that's not true... I... I shall gave my own life in exchange to save them..." In that moment, like flashes, the images of the corpses of my friends started to pass in front of my eyes again and again
"They are dead, and the only guilty it's you"
I falled over my knees cring and screaming
"NO! NO! It wasn't my fault! It wasn't my fault!"
"Why Vivio? Why you let them die? You hated them that much?"
"GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!!" THe ground beneath me collapsed, I falled again into a area even more dark, more tombs and skelletons, I quickly standed up, the images and the voice of Edmund had gone, at least for that moment, suddenly, the ground started to trumble, an inmense ring of fire appeared in the middle of the room, then I heared a horrible sound, like the roar of an inmense beast
A giant skelleton hand came out of the ring of fire, folowed by a monstruos skull, holded by an inmense pile of flesh who was bleeding, the other arm came out and finally I saw in front of me an enormus slave of the Dark, the beast opened his mouth revealing several skelletons who were moving and tring to catch me, I jumped back and recognise the creature, it was a Soul Eater, a verduge from the hell
The monster alunche fire from his mouth to me, I easely evade it and counter attacked with my pistols, the bullets didn't harmed the giant slave, he attacked again this time tring to crush me with his inmense hands, I also evaded but this time was more dificult
Once again, the slave launched fire from his mouth against me, ignoring that it was a trcik, I jumped to evade it, but the Soul Eater catched me with his inmense hand, with me traped in his fist, he started to crush me, I felt how my bones were going to be pulverizated, I needed to do something, I started to push back, now that I was a slave, I had gained more strenght, I released my self from his fist, but this slave was no fool, he opened his mouth and launched me inside it, the skelletons on it catched me, thgey garbed my legs and arms
"Levae me! Leave me!" I was screaming while the Soul Eater was slowly closing his mouth
With my strenght, I release one of my hands and quickly grabed my Axe to release me from those condemed souls, inside the mouth of the soul eater, I pointed my arm to his palate, I shoted again and again, I totally downloaded more than 5 cartridges on the beast, the slave screamed. I jumped out of his mouth just in time how he returned inside the ring who disaperaed after this
"You are strong" Edmund said "But you are just delaing the inebitable, you'r soul is mine now, there is nothing you can do" I ignored him and keeped walking
After something like 2 hours, I found my self in some kind of cave, aparently, I had leaved the catacombs behind, I spoted a big pool of water in the middle of the chamber, I was so thirsthy, I quickly ran at it and with my hads I toke a sorb of water, although it wasclean, in my mouth it tasted horrible and I inmediatly throwit
"That will not saciate your thirsth" I heread again the voice of Edmund but this time it wasn't in my head, I rised my eyes and saw that he was standing just at my said "The slaves of the dark only drink blood, remember?"
I standed up shaking and told him
"Stop... this, I... will never be a Slave"
"Vivio, as I said, the only guilty here it's you, for your wishes of revenge, for your heart full of wrath, your soul turned weak, that's why Abomination was able to pass you the curse" ALthough I hate to admit it, he was right, Abomination could corrupt me because my only motivation to fight was revenge and hate, Edmund rised his hand to me
"Serve me, Vivio Valentine, and I promise you that I will be mersefull"
"Never! I prefer to die!"
"In that case" He said "I will end with your suffering, RIGHT NOW!"
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