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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
The end of the days
"Karil, is the daughter of Raphael" I felt if like this words were bullets shooted against my head, Raphael the father of Karil?!
"You... you can't be speaking serius! It's absurd! If... If Raphael is the father of Karil why... why he was so mean with her all these years? Since I remember, Rapahel always trated Karil like a pice of trash!"
Raphael toke a long breath, and looking at the sky he just replyed
"To protect her" The he continued "When Nanoha killed my wife in order to became her victim 19, I inmediatly knew that my... taht my baby was victim 20, although Nanoha was captured and killed, I knew that she would eventually return... to complete the ritual of the arm of sin... to kille my beautifull Karil, so... I gave the baby to my friend, Augustus Lightstar and his wife Teresa Lightstar who also were Vatican Knights, they always had wished to have a son, I... gave them my daughter and told everybody that my son had died along with his mother, I though that Agustus and Teresa would take care of her and rise her very well, but one day, Jack Velorius killed them and acording to the rules of the the Vatican Knights, Karil was forced to join the order, so I do the only thing I had left, I dispresed her, I insulted her and trated her like nothing to make sure that noone ever suspect, that she was my daughter"
Raphael sited and looked down, talking more to hymself that to me
"15 years, unable to hug my daughter, to kiss her, to say any nice word to her, making her hate me, 15 years suffering in silence to protect her..."
"Raphael..." I never espect to hear something like that from him
"When the Centurion bited the arm of Karil, I though taht if she lost her arm, she could leave the order... that's why I wanted Pink to cut her arm, but all for what? At last it was my fault that Nanoha discovered that she was my daughter"
"What?" I asked, Black Wolfness then replyed
"The only ones who knew that Karil was the daughter of Raphael, were Drako Sasuke and me, when Raphael came to America he told me that he couldn't resist any longer, that he wanted to tell Karil all the true, a conversation that probably Sky heared"
In that moment I felt so guilty, Raphale passed 15 years suffering in silence, so close to his daughter but at the same time so far
"Raphael, plkease forgiv-!"
"Vivio?! What?! What is it?!" Raphael asked, I felt that my heart was getting cold, it hurted a lot, I couldn't breath, then I felt myslef so... hungry, I rise my head and saw the horse of Black Wolfness, I couldn't resist myself, like a savage animal, I jumped over the horse and bited it on his neck, the animal screamed while I sucked his blood, it's disgusting for me to just remeber it
"Vivio! Vivio!" Black Wolfness pulled me back, in this moment I reactionated
"What... what did I just did?!" I said while looking at the dead animal
"It's the curse of the Slaves Vivio, it's not your fault" Balck Wolfness replyed
"I will not allow this!" Raphael said whil walking at the ring of fire who was still open
"Rapahel?! What are you doing?!" Black Wolfness said while stoping him
"May be if I kill Nanoha, I can stop the curse taht is corrupting Vivio, I will go there and I'll face her"
"Are you crazy?!" Black Wolfness replyed "In that place she has the advantage! You had no idea of what..." Before Black Wolfness could end, the sky suddenlt turned black, like oif the whole area has been covered by a black storm, then we spoted some kind of red light who was coming from the sky, the balck clouds formed a circle, a big one revealing the red ligh
In an instand, tons of Slaves of the Dark started to came out of it, there were an entire army, Centurions, banshees, gluts, undeads! All of them were falling from the sky
"It has started" Raphale said, he and Blac Wolfness pulled out their weapons,I was the only one who noticed that the flames who werecoming out of the ring of fire, formed as big, demoniac hand who was going to grab the keyes who were still on the pedestal, I quickly standed up and jumped over the keyes grabing them, but the hand of fire grabedme and pulled me inside the ring of Fire
"VIVIO!!!!" Raphale screamed unable to do anything while I found myself falling into a black abyss at the time the ring of fire got closed
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