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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
The flames who caughted me dissapeared and I hited a solid ground with violence, I quickly standed up, first I looked at my hands, I still had the 3 keyes, I saved them in my pocket and looked around, this place was horrible, enormus rocks standing on an enormus ocean of lava, statues of horrible figures surrounded by fire, red clouds covered the upper area and at the distance I could her the screams of people who beged for mercy and forgivness, I was no longer in America, I was in the Hell
I started to walk in this place, looking for Karil or Nanoha when suddenly I saw what seemed to be a big mechanism, in the middle of it there was some kind ofd pedestal and resting on the pedestal I saw Karil
I quickly ran at her, she was justresting at the pedestal, her sight was lost, I talked to her but she didn't responded, she was like in some kind of trance
"Karil! Karil!" I keeped screamed, grabing her and shaking her but she keeped the same way
"So... Sky couldn't hold you, uh? It's okay, he wouldn't seen the end of the day anyway" I recognise that voice, I raised my head and saw Nanoha standing in the border of the field, looking at me and smiling
"What did you do to her?!" I screamed grabing my axe and standing in front of her
"Her souls is preparing to the ritual, the last one of the 20 sacrifices will be completed, and that way, the Arm of Sin will get activated and it will clean the world from all it's sins"
"No! You will nver put a hand on her! I will never allow it to you!"
"He, he! You are a fool for coming here Vivio, but don't fear, you won't be staing long" Nanoha said, with my Axe in hand I prepared myself to face the White Devil
Nanoha, rised her hands, from the ground at her side, little creatures similar to big cocroachs appeared, I say big because they had the size of a dog, they were more ugly than scary
"Destroy her for me, my childrens!" Nanoha comanded to the demons while her "childrens" started to crawl aproaching to me, I quickly swinged my Axe, tring to take them down quickly, one single cut was enough to kill them but there was many of them, every time I killed one, from the ground appeared 5 more!
I keeped swinging my Axe, the yellow blood from this creatures stained my Axe and clothes everytime I slashed time, while Nanha laughed everytime one of this "childrens" hurted me biting me with their little fangs
During this fight, I lost Nanoha from sdight in an instant, then she reapered in an upper area casting fire balls against me,Why she didn't do that since the begining? Well, I thing that she was having fun with me
Althoug Nanoha was lauching this fire balls against me, I manage to dodge every one of her attacks and finally I toke down every one of those little creatures, Nanoha ther reapered in front of me
"How does it feel Vivio? How does it feel the fdemon that is growing inside you?"
"You alredy know it. Don't?"
She giggled "You really want to know? You really want to see a true demon?!" She backuped and raised her hands again, from the ground apperaed once moreseveral of thei little demons, but they didn't attacked me, they just staied like waiting for Nanoha's orders
"Come to me! My Childrens!" Nanoha opened her arms, the several demons runed at her jumping on her and literally, entering into her chest, withe tunic of Nanoha teared appart leaving her nacked while these demons were penetrating her body, I though that she was going to explote, but when the last one finally enetered totally on her chest she started to scream,like if she was sufering some kind of pain
A long and thin leg appeared benethg her, followed for another 5, her human legs disapeared eaving this insectoid limbs holding er body who was growing up and her skin was turning into a greet color, en enormus skull face appeared on her stomach and some enormus deformation appeared on her back, Nanoha, the white Devil revealed her true self, a demon, one who looked like a horrible giant spider!
"Now, my little Vivio" She said with a voice who sounded now relly threathering "It's time to you to know what does 'pain' really means"
Demon Nanoha and childrens
PD: That "hell"image isn't a draw of mine
it is truly an image of a stage from a MortalKombat videogame but I though that It would feet weel on this chapter XP
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