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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
I must admit that the aspect of Nanoha scared me, all sence of human had disapeared on her, she was horrible
"Get closeer and I'll slash you up!" I said while rising my axe
"Ohhhh..... You will?" Nanoha Jumped over me, I almos got crushed but I managed to dodge her descomunal body jumping just in time
I quickly standed up but before I could do something, she launched me away with one of her legs, I almos fall over the edge to the ocean of lava, fortunely I managed to brake with my claws
From were I wasI saw that the mouth of the skull that was in Nanoha's stomach get opened, I saw how a little ball of fire appeared on it, I knew what was next
I started to run in order to avoid the enormus flame who came out of the Skull's mouth, I still didn't reincorporate myself when Nanoha attacked me with spider wave, yes, she was throwing me spider wave, I tried to avoid it but she managed to tied my feets so I falled, I was tring to release my self from the glue while she was aproaching to me smiling
She standed over me and I spoted a sting on her back, I quickly roled before she could impale it to me, with my axe, I managed to broke the spider wave but before I could attack her, she launched me away again with one of her legs, she was strong, she was really strong
"Why Vivio? Why you had to suffer this pain when you can just avoid it?" She asked to me
"What are you talking about?" I replyed while standing up
"You are now a demon Vivio... just like me, we shouldn't been fighting, we should be forming an alliance" I knew what she was tring to get, I rised my axe in order to attack her but she launched more fire against me so I was forced to avoid it
"Your stupid boyfrined Edmund said the same nonsecne, I will never allie with someone like you!"
"Ohhh... it's not that simple Vivio" She gigled while raising her hand, I felt something very strange on my body, if like it was betraing me! Aginst my will I droped my Axe and falled over my knees looking down, I tried to stand up, but my body didn't responded, if like I had lost control on it
"Wha... What are you... doing to me?" I asked
"I'm more than a simple greater demon Vivio... I'm a demon Overlord, and as a demon overlord,I had the power to control lesser demons at my will, lesser demons like you!"
"N- N- NO!" I screamed still unable to stand up
"And as I told you before... you will hand over the keyes to me!" She comanded while aproaching her hand to me
My arm started to move by it's one, I tried to stop it but I was unable to do something, my hand toke out the 3 keyes from my pocket, my arm get aproached to Nanoha's hand and release the keyes! I gave the keyes to Nanoha!
I saw how she laughed of happyness while looking at the keyes, she turned agains the machine in wich Karil was and released the keyes, as if they had life, the keyes started to float around Karil, I saw that the strange machine started to make strange noises
"Now" Nanoha said "With the 3 keyes; lust, greed and wrath on their place, there is only one thing left to do"
I knew of what she was talking about, the only thing left to activate the arm of sin was to kill Karil
I don't know if it was because Nanoha got distracted or beacuse I used all my strenghts but I managed to release myself from this "control" I grabed my Axe and charge against Nanoha smashing her chest, she pulled back by the impact and falled over the edge
"AHHHHHHH!!!!!" She screamed while falling into the big Ocean of lava that was below, I looked over the edge, there was no sign of her, I though that probably she was consumed inside that lava
I standed up and walked in direction to themachine who was still making strange noises when suddenly the ground started to trumble
I falled again, I was wondering what was going on when suddenly I heard a loud, big infernal voice who screamed
"ENOUGH OF THIS!" The voise was still female, it was the voice of Nanoha!
"YOUR MISERABLE LIFE ENDS HERE!" A wall of lava appeared in the same place in wich Nanoha falled, I spoted and inmenese figure who was coming out of it, it flied over me and falled ner at the machine
I saw some kind og giant gargyole, with red skyn, a skelleton face with horns, bull's feets and two enormus clubs as weapons, the giant demon slowly turned at me and I saw her, her figure attached at the chest of the beast, The white Devil!"
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