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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
I couldn't belive what I was seing, that monster was enormus, it was giant, bigger than Los Ganados and even bigger than El Lago, I was only armd with my axe, not even a simple pistol, I couldn't win, I just couldn't
"IT'S OVER VIVIO" Nanoha said "DIE!!!!!!" She charged one of her's giant clubs against me, I avoided it, the simple hit of the descomunal weapon made the earth trumble
I was not even on foot again when she attacked me with the other club, I just saved myself by too close, I tried to hit her leg with my Axe but my Axe was unable to even cut her skyn, in retrivution, she tried to crush me with her feets, as if I were some kind of Ant, it was probably thanks to my "demon" speed and agility that I managed to dodge her
The only thing that I though to do was to climb a mountain that was at my side, Nanoha spoted me and hited the mountain with one of her clubs, I was almost throwed down but I managed to hold one and keep climbing, the mountain wasn't really big, I managed to reach the top
The skulls that were attached at the beast's chest leaved the main body and started to float around me, one by one they started to charge against me,they litterally hited the ground in wich I was with their entire... well, skull
They hurted me this time, the hit launched me away, throwing me out of the mountain, but before I hitted the ground, Nanoha catched me with one of her descomunal hands, my Axe falled to the ground while the beeast rised me making some kind or triumph roar, then he aproached me to Nanoha who was attached at the demon's chest
"NOW, MY DEAR..." She said "... I WILL CRUSH YOUR MIND"
Nanoha luaghed while I started to feel a horrible pain in my head, it was Nanoha, somehow she was inside it, in an instant, the memories of the deads of my friends started to pass in front of my eyes, one after one, again andf again, it was horrible
"Nooo!.... Pls.... Please! S-Stooop!" It was horrible, I can't descrive how horrible it was, I felt that my brain was going to tear apart
"I WILL ENJOY THIS VIVIO, I WILL ENJOY SEE HOW YOUR MIND WILL BE CRUSHING YOU, HOW EVERY SINGLE PAIN OF THE EXISTENCE WILL TURTURE YOU, AND ONLY UNTIL YOU BEG FOR ME TO KILL YOU, I'LL CONCIDERATE TO PUT A QUICK END TO YOUR EXISTENCE"
The images just keeped appearing in my mind, I couldn't hold anymore, I jus wanted to die, to stop that suffering at any cost, I just wanted to stop suffering
In an instant, I found my self naked into a place covered with darkness, I was so scared, I was cring, I was cring I feeled that I was alone
"Why?... I just want to... to live... to live in peace, why I can't? WHY?!" I was asking this to myself, when suddenly a familiar voice replyed to me
"Vivio, stand up, you'r not that weak" I recognise his voice and quickly raised my head
"Al... Alphonse?!" Another voice came behind him
"You are not alone, we are here with you"
"Helga..." I replyed when I saw her standing next to Alphonse
"You are strong, stronger than the white Devil"
Pink appeared also
"Pink..." Finally at my right I also heared his voice
"Are you going to let her do what she had planed?"
"Jasper!" They were there, my friends who died facing Nanoha, who gave their lives tring to stop her, suporting me in esence
"Vivio..." I felt an incredible sensation of Hapyness when I heared his voice cominf from behind me, I quickly turned to see him
"Dad!" I screamed while runing at the arms of my beloved father
"My little girl, don't fear, I'm here, I had been always here, fighnting beside you in all your battles, facing along with you everyone of your foes, don't surrender now, not now"
"Dady, please! Let me go with you!"
"No, not yet, therte is still someone else who needs you" I understood the words of my father, I clened my tears and looked himn at the eyes
"I will not faild you" I said, my father kissed my forehead and the the darkness who was surrounding me dissapeared, once again, I found myself traped on the hand of the enormus demon, but the thing were diferent now
"WHAT? WHAT IS GOING ON?" Nanoha asked confused watching that she has no longer power over my mind
"I'm not that weak! You will regret to had turned me into a demon, because I will kill you with the powers you gave me" A ball of fire appeared on my hands, slowly I turned it into a giant blade covered in flames
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Nanoha screamed while I swinged the enormus blade of fire decapitating her, the enormus beast screamed while realising me, I landed over my foots and watched how the enormus beast get involved in flames and banished leaving only a little mist of ashes
Nanoha, the white Devil was finally dead
I turned at the machine and saw that Karil awaked, she slowly standed up and walked away of the pedestal, she looked really confused
"Karil!" I called her while runing at her, but when I aproached I noticed that she looked sad
"Karil!" I repeated once more while tring to hug her, but she didn't allowed me to do it
"Karil? Wha-what is going on? Don't worry! It's over! Nanoha is dead!"
"No Vivio, it's not over" She replyed
"What? What are you..."
"Is time for you to choice Vivio, there is no salvation for me now, but you still can save yourself"
"What... what are you talking about?" Only in this instand I noiticed that the machine was still activated and that I was still a demon, with a sad voiuce, Karil told me
"You'll have to choose Vivio... Strike me down with your weapon in order to complete the ritual and you'll gain power as Nanoha dream to be, destroy the arm of sin to cast his evil away for ever, but if you choose to destroy the arm of sin, you will die"
"Now... What you will do, my ldear Vivio?"
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