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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
"No, NO! That's ridiculous! Nanoha is dead, it's all over!" I screamed tring to convence Karil
"No, Vivio, it's not over" She said while pointing the machine who was still active "Listen, if you don't kill me or destroy the machine, it will destroy the world! But if you activate it, you will also be able to stop it, there is no salavation for me, but you still can save yourself, quick, you must kill me"
"No! I never, I will destroy the machine and we will die together!" I choised this with all my heart, if Karil, my last and only friend, family member had to die, then I shall die along with her
"Vivio, listen, I will die and I will become a lost Soul, my soul will be traped here forever, if you die here, the same will hapen to you" This words totally destroyed my herat, so I wasn't going to be able to stay with my beloved Karil even after dead? We will never going to be together?
"Karil... you are all that I have... please... don't make me do this, please!" My face get fulled with tears
"If you love me, then do it... please" She also started to cry, there was no other choise,
"I love you..." I said looking at her, with en enormus suffering, I rised my Axe, puting it behind me, ready to be launched against my dear Karil
"I love you too... Vivio..." Karil closed her eyes, and she just stayed there, witing to recive the deadly hit
I closed my eyes too, and launched the Axe, but aftter release it from my hands, I turned to the machine, my Axe flought and smashed the core of the Arm of Sin, the machine started to make a horrible sound, life metal being crushed, Karil opened her eyes and looked at the machine "What have you done?" I quickly ran at her and huged her "Always together, no matter in wich sircunstances, Alway together!" I said holding her head againstmine
"Vivio..." She huged me to and we bouth closed our eyes, hearing the machine tearing apart, loud explotions and pices falling, but then, in an instant, silence, I didn't fell anything,I just keeped huging Karil with all my strenght, Was I dead?
I decided to open my eyes,very slow, I saw snow, broken walls of rock and the big and beautifull Sun rising at the blue Sky, Wew were again in the clod mountains from were Nanoha opened the portal to the Hell
"What?" Karil said while opening her eyes too "How did we...?" Karil didn't finished the question because she noticed that something was wrong with me,and indeed something was very wrong with me
I started to feel a horrible pain in my heart, I colapsed, it was the curse, the dead of Nanoha didn't stoped it, I was turning into a demon
"Vivio! Vivio!" Karil screamed while holding me
"Get... get away from me!" I screamed
"I... I will turn in an inmstant into a demon... I will attack you... run, just run"
"No, no way! I will not leave you, I will not leave you like this!"
"You don't... understeand... just... Run before I... UGH!!!!" My arm tried to hurt Karil, she jumped back to avoid it, I was loosing control of my body,I had to do something, I looked aroun and I spoted the gun of Sky,probably he droped it in our showdown, I extended my hand and grbed it pointing it agains my head, there was no other choise
"Vivio, NOOOO!!!" Karil screamed and ran at me with the intention to stop me, but I kicked launching Karil at the floor "I love you Karil" I repeated one more time and placed the my finger in the triller in order to suicide myself when I suddenly felt that a hand pulled the gun away from me, it wasn't Karil, I turned and saw a familiar face, little Nanoha
Before I could do anything, little Nanoha launched the gun away and kissed me in my forehead, I felt something very strange on my body, it didn't hurt, it felt reall... soft, like a warm calm going through all my body, when little Nanoha pulled her lips away from my forehead, I felt myself very good, the pain disaperaed, I looked at my hand, the claws had disapeared, I was a human again! The curse of the Slaves has gonne!
Little Nanoha huged me with strengh "Thanks" that was all that she said before disapearing into a white mist who slowly rised to the skyes heared laughs, luaghs of Happines who joined that white mist, I inmediatly knew, the souls of Nanoha's Victims were free, all was finally over
"Vivio?" Karil asked slowly aproachin at me, I looked at her and smiling I replyed "It's all over, Kareil it's finally all over!" I quickly standed and huged her, she do the same, we were laughing an hugin each oter like 5 yers old girls, I felt so happy, but then Karil looked at my face and stoped
"What? What is it?" I asked a bit worried, she just replyed "Your eyes..."
"What's wrong with them?" I asked even more worried,Karil searched in her pocket and pulled out a little mirror, she gave it to me, I inmediatly looked at my reflection
Although one of my eyes had recovered his usual green color, the other was still red, not glowing, just with a red color, I had now a green eye and a red eye
"I think you look pretty" Karil giggled, I droped the mirror and laughed too huging her again whe we heared a familiar voice
"Vivio!" I turned and saw Black Wolfness along with Raphael, thei'r clothes were scratched and they had some raspons, but they both were alive
"Raphael, what happened to all the demons?" I asked
"They just... disapeared a few moments ago" Black Wolfness replyed, Rapahel just stayed looking at Karil, hiding his happiness of see her alive, I turned at Karil and said to her
"Karil,listen, Raphael is..." Before I could reveal Karil the truth, Raphael interrupted me saing
"... He is very sorry for wht he did to you in the past... I'm really sorry Karil" My friend just nooded, I understeand the message, it was better for Karil to don't know, Rapahel looked to Black Wolfness and said to her
"We must inform Dr. Van Hellsing that th so called White Devil is finally dead and that her plans to activate the arm of sin were frustrated by the Paladin Vivio Valentine... but also, that the Vatican Paladin Vivio Valentine and the Regulator Karil Lightstar both died during the battle"
We look each other really confused, Raphel then aproached to us and removed the belts on our necks, he placed his hand on my shoulder and said
"You are free, start a new life, away from demons and weapons, life in peace from now on" He placed a bag fulled with pices of silver on my hand, Karil and me, we both were free!
I jumped at Raphael and huged him, we were free, we wouldn't be forced to fight again! It was all over!
Rapahel pathed our heads and along with Black Wolfness he walked away, I grabed Karil from her hand and walked in the opsite direction
"Now what" Karil asked Huging my arm
"I don't know" I replyed "The important is, that we will be together" I kissed her forehead and keeped walking
The Sun was above us, and an entire life together in our front
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Wow, I don't know what to say ^^;
76 chapters, I felt myself very happy but also very sad, more happy than sad that's for sure
Well, I just want to thanks all for reading Vatican Knights and for suporting my crazy ideas
really, thank you guys!!!
I will bring you more fics, and more crazy ideas, as long as you like them, I will keep writing
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