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Incoherance is my friend!
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My fevered and funky bwain over the last few days have been working on Damion Crevasse lyrics here's the near final lyrics for them, the main thing I did was change the focus of the song from the direct lyric theme of all encompassing/altruistic love to where the the singer is dieing, I was trying for a direct one but the muses took it of in a sad love song direction first, I may yet can do a more direct version but this is somehow fitting all things considered.
I still need to polish this up and format it better, by each of my lyric sentences(ya I know not grammatical correct :P) I put one word comment in ()
YT video for the song if you don't have it on hand.
Quote:
When I was so very-------- much in----------love with you(good)
kami-sama ni-------------------koi wo-------------shiteta koro wa
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I didn’t think that such------a parting would have to come to pass like this(good)
konna wakare ga----------------kuru towa omottenakatta yo
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Then I would want you to-------------embrace me again for--------one last time(good)
semete saigo ni-----------------------------mou ichido dakishimete---- hoshikatta yo
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It’s long long good-bye…
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Sayonara, sayonara-----------as much as it takes(good)
sayonara sayonara------------nando datte
--------------------it appers this one I am still working on lol---------
My shivering hands are------signs of gentleness right?-zip
My shivering hands are----- a sign of gentleness right?-zip
Waving my hand is----------- a sign of kindness? Ya….. –zip
te wo furu nowa----------------yasashisa dayo ne?
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Now I long--------for------strength
ima tsuyosa-------ga-------hoshii
--------------this could change but the top one seems best.--------------------
I encountered you,---the stars shined brightly,------------and I was reborn(best)
I encountered you,---then the stars shined,-----------------and I was reborn
I encountered you,---then the stars shined,-----------------and then I was reborn
anata ni deai------------STAR kagayaite---------------------------atashi ga umarete
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---------------------------in order to drive the theme the 2d is the best
Indeed if there is love,-----therefore I exist
Indeed if there is love,---- therefore I still exist (best)
aisureba koso-------------------I areba koso
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What will happen---------to me waiting on a---------hopeless miracle?(good)
kibou no nai-----------------kiseki wo matte-------------dou naru no?
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Through our tear stained vision-------the worlds twinkle is long,------gone(good)
namida ni nijimu--------------------------------hoshi no matataki-------------------wa gone...
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I will never forget---------your soft gentle warmth(ok)
wasurenai yo----------------anata no nukumori mo
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or your kindness--and----your gentle hands that surrounded----everything
sono yasashisa---mo-------subete tsutsunde kureta------------------ryoute mo
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It's long long good-bye...
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Sayonara, sayonara, oh beloved one(good)
sayonara sayonara itoshii hito
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If you were not------here with me---------I wouldn’t be right here now(best)
If you were not------here with me----------I could have never got this far(best)
anata ga----------------ita kara-------------------aruite koreta
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I was never really---------------alone was I,-----------right?-zip
hitori nanka------------------------jyanakatta yo--------- ne?
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Now I long------------- for answers -zip
ima kotae---------------ga hoshii
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Catch a falling star-----and set it ablaze with---my dying love and hope(great)
moeru you na--------------ryuusei tsukamaete------hi wo tomoshite
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I still want to love,--------I still want to be loved(good)
aishiteitai----------------------aisaretetai
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What good is one more-------cold and frozen body,------------to this world
hieta karada-------------------------hitotsu de sekai wa--------------dou naru no?
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I so long for when these----silly games we play end,------so long for.(great for the word play)
haritsudzuketeta-----------------kyosei ga toketeku---------------long for...
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What’s wrong with me now?------I can’t stop these falling tears-----from overflowing.
doushite nano?----------------------------namida afurete---------------------------tomerarenai
--------------this could change but the top one seems best.--------------------
I encountered you,---the stars shined brightly,------------and I was reborn(best)
I encountered you,---then the stars shined,-----------------and I was reborn
I encountered you,---then the stars shined,-----------------and then I was reborn
anata ni deai------------STAR kagayaite---------------------------atashi ga umarete
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Indeed if there is love,------therefore I once existed(great!it had to be don!)
aisureba koso--------------------i areba koso
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What will happen---------to me waiting on a---------hopeless miracle?(good)
kibou no nai-----------------kiseki wo matte-------------dou naru no?
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Through our tear stained vision-------the worlds twinkle is long,------gone(good)
namida ni nijimu--------------------------------hoshi no matataki-------------------wa gone...
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If we are reincarnated and meet again one day so far away(ok to great)
moshi umarekawatte mata meguriaeru nara
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Surely you’ll find me and----------hold onto me very tightly(great)
sono toki mo kitto--------------------atashi wo mitsukedashite
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and make sure to-------never let go of me ever again(good)
mou nido to---------------hanasanaide tsukamaetete
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----------------this one annoys me some, but there's lil I can do with it
I want you to whisper------------you are not alone on this planet.(ok)
hitori jyanai to----------------------- sasayaite hoshii-------------planet...
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Spoiler for Word play work file for it.:
best lyrics on top for most of them
Diamond Crevasse lyrics
When I was so very much in love with you-zip
When I was very much in love with you-zip
kami-sama ni koi wo shiteta koro wa
When I was in love with God
When I was still in love with god,
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I didn’t think that such a parting would have to come to pass like this-zip
konna wakare ga kuru towa omottenakatta yo
I didn’t think that such a parting would come
I never thought such a farewell would come.
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If I knew I would never touch you ever again-zip
If I knew I would never touch you ever again-zip(weak)
mou nido to furerarenai nara
If I couldn’t ever touch you again
If I had known I could never feel your touch again,
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Then I would want you to embrace me again for one last time-zip
Then I want you to embrace me again yet for one last time
semete saigo ni mou ichido dakishimete hoshikatta yo
Then I’d want you to embrace me again for the last time at least
I would've hoped to be embraced just one last time.
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It’s long long good-bye…
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Sayonara, sayonara as much as it takes-zip
sayonara sayonara nando datte
Sayonara, sayonara as much as it takes
Goodbye, goodbye, over and over again
Goodbye, goodbye, so many times,
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I tell myself as best as I can over and over again-zip
jibun ni mujou ni iikikasete
I tell myself as best as I can over again-zip
I repeated the word to myself,
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My shivering hands are signs of love right?-zip
My shivering hands are signs of care right?-zip
My shivering hands are signs of gentleness right?-zip
My shivering hands are a sign of gentleness right?-zip
Waving my hand is a sign of kindness? Ya….. –zip (best)
Waving my hand is a sign of kindness?-zip
te wo furu nowa yasashisa dayo ne?
Waving my hand is a sign of kindness right?
Waving my hand is kindness, right?
Waving my hands. It's only graceful, right?
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Now I long for strength
ima tsuyosa ga hoshii
Now, I want strength
Now, I long to be stronger.
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I encountered you, the stars shined brightly, and I was reborn-zip
I encountered you, then the stars shined, and I was reborn-zip
I encountered you, then the stars shined, and then I was reborn-zip
I encountered you, then the stars shined, then I was reborn-zip
I encountered you, the stars shined, I was reborn-zip
I encountered you and the stars shined and I was reborn-zip
I encountered you the stars shined and I was reborn-zip
anata ni deai STAR kagayaite atashi ga umarete
I encountered you; the STAR shined and I was born
I met you, the stars sparkled, and I was born.
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Indeed if there is love, therefore I exist –zip
Indeed if there is love, therefore I still exist –zip
aisureba koso I areba koso
Indeed if I love, indeed if there’s i
I love you, therefore I am.
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What will happen to me waiting on a hopeless miracle?-zip (best grammar)
Waiting on a hopeless miracle what will become of me now?-zip
Waiting on a hopeless miracle now what will become of me ?-zip
Waiting for a hopeless miracle what will become of me now ?-zip
Waiting for a hopeless miracle what will befall me now ?-zip
kibou no nai kiseki wo matte dou naru no?
Waiting for a hopeless miracle, what will become of me?
What good is waiting for a hopeless miracle?
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Through our tear stained vision the worlds twinkle is long, gone-zip
Through our tear stained vision the worlds twinkle is gone-zip
namida ni nijimu hoshi no matataki wa gone...
The twinkle of planets stained with tears is gone…
Through my tear-filled vision, the planet's twinkle is gone...
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I will never forget your soft gentle warmth, -zip
I will never forget your kindness or your warmth, -zip
I will never forget your warmth or-zip
I shall never forget your warmth or-zip
wasurenai yo anata no nukumori mo
I won’t forget your warmth
I can't ever forget your warmth,
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or your kindness and your gentle hands that surrounded everything-zip
your kindness and your gentle hands that surrounded everything-zip
sono yasashisa mo subete tsutsunde kureta ryoute mo
Your kindness, and your hands that surrounded everything
Your kindness, and your all-encompassing hands.
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It's long long good-bye...
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Sayonara, sayonara, oh beloved one-zip
sayonara sayonara itoshii hito
Goodbye, goodbye, beloved one
Goodbye, goodbye, my beloved.
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If you were not here with me I wouldn’t be right here now-zip
If you were not here with me I would never be here now-zip
If you were not here with me I would never gotten so far-zip
If you were not here with me I could have never got this far-zip
If you were not here with me I could have never gone-zip
anata ga ita kara aruite koreta
If you were with me, I would’ve been able to walk here
I came this far because you were here.
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I was never really alone was I, right?-zip
I was never really alone was I?-zip
I was never alone was I?-zip
hitori nanka jyanakatta yo ne?
I wasn’t alone, right?
I wasn't alone, was I?
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Now I long for answers -zip
ima kotae ga hoshii
Now, I want the answer
Now, I long for answers.
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Catch a falling star and set it ablaze with my dying love and hope-zip
moeru you na ryuusei tsukamaete hi wo tomoshite
Catch the comets that seem to be burning and light the fire
Catch a falling star that looks ablazed and light a fire,
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I still want to love, I still want to be loved-zip
aishiteitai aisaretetai
I want to love, I want to be loved
I still want to love, and I still want to be loved.
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What good is one more cold and frozen body, to this world-zip
What good is one cold and frozen body, to this world-zip
hieta karada hitotsu de sekai wa dou naru no?
What good is one cold and frozen body, to this world-zip
What good is one cold and frozen body, to this meandering world-zip
By one chilled body, what will become of the world?
What good is a lone freezing body to this world?
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I so long for when these silly games we play end, so long for-zip
I so long for the silly games we play to end so long for-zip
haritsudzuketeta kyosei ga toketeku long for...
This tough act that we keep up is breaking down-zip
The stern resolve that I keep up is breaking down-zip
The bravado that I kept up is dissolving; long for…
I long for you to finally drop your act...
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What’s wrong with me now? I can’t stop these falling tears from overflowing. –zip
What’s wrong with me? I can’t stop these tears from overflowing. –zip
doushite nano? namida afurete tomerarenai
What's wrong? Why can't I stop my tears from overflowing?
What’s the matter? My tears overflow and they can’t stop
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I encountered you, the stars shined brightly, and I was reborn-zip
I encountered you, then the stars shined, and I was reborn-zip
I encountered you, then the stars shined, and then I was reborn-zip
I encountered you, then the stars shined, then I was reborn-zip
I encountered you, the stars shined, I was reborn-zip
I encountered you and the stars shined and I was reborn-zip
I encountered you the stars shined and I was reborn-zip
anata ni deai STAR kagayaite atashi ga umarete
I encountered you; the STAR shined and I was born
I met you, the stars sparkled, and I was born.
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Indeed if there is love, therefore I once existed -zip
aisureba koso i areba koso
Indeed if I love, therefore I am-zip
Indeed if I love, indeed if there’s i
I love you, therefore I am.
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What will happen to me waiting on a hopeless miracle?-zip (best grammar)
Waiting on a hopeless miracle what will become of me now?-zip
Waiting on a hopeless miracle now what will become of me ?-zip
Waiting for a hopeless miracle what will become of me now ?-zip
Waiting for a hopeless miracle what will befall me now ?-zip
kibou no nai kiseki wo matte dou naru no?
Waiting for a hopeless miracle, what will become of me?
What good is waiting for a hopeless miracle?
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Through our tear stained vision the worlds twinkle is long, gone –zip
namida ni nijimu hoshi no matataki wa gone...
Through our tear stained vision the world has lost its twinkle-zip
The twinkle of planets stained with tears is gone…
Through my tear-filled vision, the planet's twinkle is gone...
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If we are reincarnated and meet again one day far away-zip
If we are reborn we can meet each other once more again -zip
If we are reborn we can meet each other again one day -zip
moshi umarekawatte mata meguriaeru nara
If I am reborn and we can come across each other again
If we are reincarnated and can meet again some day,
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Surely you’ll find me and hold onto me very tightly-zip
Surely you’ll find me and hold onto me tightly-zip
sono toki mo kitto atashi wo mitsukedashite
Surely you’ll find me then
Please find me and hold me tight,
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And make sure to never let go of me ever again-zip
mou nido to hanasanaide tsukamaetete
Don’t ever let go of me again, catch me
And make sure you don't let go again.
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I want you to whisper you are not alone on this planet.
hitori jyanai to sasayaite hoshii planet...
I want you to whisper you are not alone , oh falling star
I want you to whisper, “You’re not alone” to me, planet…
I wish the planet would whisper to me that I'm not alone...
My Real folk blues lyrics with some changes.
YT video for the song if you don't have it on hand.
Code:
real folk blues –do over
Too much time has passed | to lament | the past
Aishiteta to | nageku | ni wa
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When we were | still | so very | much in love
Amari ni mo | toki | wa sugi | te simatta
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The restless wind| still | blowing threw my heart | can never heal all of these | tears within it.
Mada kokoro | no | hokorobi o | Iyasenumama kaze ga | fuiteru
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One eye sees nothing | but tomorrow | the other sees nothing but | yesterday.
Hitotsu no me de | asu o mite | Hitotsu no me de kinou | mitsumeteru
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I hope I can | gently rest in the | cradle of your loving arms | once again
Kimi no ai no | yurikagode | Mo ichido yasurakani | nemuretara
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So sadly please | cry for | me | with dry and | weary | eyes
Kawaita | hitomi | de | dareka | naite | kure
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The real folk blues
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I really want to know | to understand | what true sadness is
Honto no | kanashimi ga | shiritai dake
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Living in | muddy | and cold water | Is not such a bad life | after all
Doro no | kawa ni | tsukatta | Jinsei mo waruku | wa nai
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As long as it | ends | after the first time.
Ichido kiri | de | owaru nara
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Hopeless hope and | a life filled with | falling in and out of traps never to | have a chance
Kibou ni michita | zetsuboto | Wanagashikakerareteru | kono chansu
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What is right or | what is wrong | Like a coin rolling forever | on its side
Nani ga yoku te | warui no ka | Koin no omoi to kuram | itaita
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How long must | I live until | I am released from this | misery
Dore dake | ikireba | iyasareru no | darou
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The real folk blues
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-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- change to----and pleasure is---
I really want to know | what true happiness | and pleasure really is
Honto no | yorokobi ga | shiritai dake
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Blinded by | rainbows | in muddy reflections | All that glitters is not gold.
Hikaru | mono | no subete ga | Ougen to wa kagiranai
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The real folk blues
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I really want to know | to understand | what true sadness is
Honto no | kanashimi ga | shiritai dake
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Living in | muddy | and cold water | Is not such a bad life | after all
Doro no | kawa ni | tsukatta | Jinsei mo waruku | wa nai
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As long as it | ends | after the first time.
Ichido kiri | de | owaru nara
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Uhg I need to re format all my lyrics, between word warp and space eating it can be tricky to have them line up from site to site ><
Last edited by ZippyDSM; 2009-07-22 at 12:36.
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