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Originally Posted by AtomicoX
EDIT: Small fluff...I don't consider it good >_>
Dancing in the Violet Light
Spoiler for Dancing in the Violet Light:
They stood at the small tent that served drinks. They had a pretty expensive and tasty drink each, toasting as if the moment was something special. They had been at a restaurant before, eating a luxurious dinner, complete with burning candles, soothing music and the moon shining in.
They were waiting for the concert to start. Nanoha had waited for several weeks for this day to come. Her favorite band was playing and she had managed to get her partner to like them too. She was very happy at this moment.
She noticed people started walking towards the big tent. It looked like the concert was about to start. She grabbed her partner’s arm and their eyes met. She smiled and pulled harder. Her partner followed after her into the crowd and after a moment they were inside. The tent was crowded with people and it was very dark. Nanoha stayed close to the person she held hands with and observed the people around her.
Then it started. The low sound grew louder and the lights on the scene turned on, revealing two men in very strange clothing and a helmet over their heads. They waved to the audience who responded with a massive cheer. The music began picking up in speed and volume. Some of the people started to move in a rhythmic dance. Then the vocals came.
One more time
By now the whole tent was in movement. The searching light swept over the people and lit up the walls in bright colors. Nanoha looked up with sparkling eyes at the face that was looking down at her. They held each other tightly and slowly danced beneath the violet light that was now spreading around the tent. The couple had a little space for themselves in the crowd, like an aura around them.
“I love you Nanoha.”
Nanoha smiled and embraced her partner harder.
“I love you too, Yuuno.”
The music continued to stream out of the speakers and the light did not stop its movement. Violet light, dancing around them.
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It didn't really feel like exact fluff (to me at least), but the ending was a real pleasant surprise. It was nice to read. There is too little of that pairing around.
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Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki
Saw a pic in the image thread that got the gears turning (or crack flowing  ). This thread needs more Hayate fics anyway  .
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That was quite something at the end. I was expecting something totally different to happen in the end (don't know what, but not THIS), but it was cute a cute conclusion. Needs a sequel.
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Originally Posted by Laith
Crossroads
To the place among heavens
…Or the devil´s home.
If you have noticed a better grammar thank TSS. I fail at it
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I really think
B sounds like a great choice.
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
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C. Because it's too funny not to choose it!
