And here's a draft of a possible chapter in the upcoming fic, Fictitious.
http://akaiak.blogspot.com/2010/10/f...preview-2.html
This time, I talk about the hentai industry wrapped around the K-On anime, and how the quality of characters (along with their development) are changed by the plot. No character is entirely inferior unless the plot makes him/her so. For those who haven't read what Fictitious is about,
here's the link.
As for the first chapter rewrite of Moe-Tsundere, it's not gonna happen... till another month or so. It's a real busy period for me (hell, this draft was roughly written). Sorry.