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Old 2011-07-23, 20:15   Link #19
Rennir
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*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
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Originally Posted by Elegance View Post

Nice new ones, but for the first, there's waaayyy too much color and it makes the tag feel over saturated. There's not enough negative space compared to the strong lighting so the effects look unnatural. In addition, the c4ds you used are too flat and that resulted in a lack of depth. I like the text though

Second one is much better, a tad monotone, but ok. Interesting effects, but they don't seem to complement each other =/

Overall, great job and keep practicing
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