Princess or Plunderer?
Join Date: May 2009
Location: the Philippines
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Fixing the dialogues.
Spoiler for part 1:
Page 2
Noda: I'm asking if you're partners!!
Yuri: Looks like he's not an underground man... But we have to think of a way to deal with his weapon.
Chaa: Understood, leave it to me.
Ooyama: eh? eh? EH?
page 3
Ooyama: WAAAHHHHHHH
Hinata: OOYAMAAAAAAA!!!
Chaa: Wow, sliced up in a flash.
Yuri: You're not the one sliced open, stop that.
Ooyama: *Sniffs...* That's too much...
Ooyama: My... My stomach is...
(words on top of Yuri : "Can't hear you")
(Kaito : No idea who's the one shouting but it says)
You're a group of devils...!
Dammit!
Page4
Noda: Let me go! (bottom) What's wrong with you people!!
Yuri: We should be the one asking you that. Do you understand, Mr Underground Man?
Noda: ... Are you guys related to that person?
Yuri: That person?
Noda: ... The underground Boss...
Noda: said "beat me to finish this game".
Page 5
Yuri: ...Game, huh?... Everyone thought that this is just a game in the beginning...
Noda: Yes! I'll use my own hands and end this...
Yuri: ...Do you know you that's impossible?
Noda: Huh?
Yuri: This world won't end by doing that. It'll still carry on like this... So we'll have to use our own powers to change it.
Yuri: (right) I'm your partner. (Left) Let's work together.
Page 6
Noda: Bu...
(Kaito: actually I'm not sure if he is saying "But" or "Ok". Both chinese words start with the same word.)
Page7:
Noda: Bu...bu... bu....o...ok...
The rest: THAT'S FAST!!
Hinata: Is it okay!? Can we trust him that easily!?
Yuri: This is the result of my strength of my leadership.
Yuri: Let me introduce myself again. I'm the leader, Yuri. (bottom) Everyone calls me Yurippe, what about you?
Noda: No... Noda...
Page8
Yuri: So then, Noda-kun, our first mission is to beat the boss here.
Noda: (the 2nd bubble to the right) Leave it to me.
Noda: (left bubble) You just have to stay back and watch. As long as I have "him", I'm invincible.
Noda: Furthermore, only I can beat that dude! (bottom) Follow me!!
Noda: Ouch!
Hinata: ... He's like an idiot.
Chaa: He IS an idiot.
Page 9
Ooyama: Wahhhh~~~ It's so scary. It's so dark. And it's so painful.
Hinata: Hey, have we arrived yet? Why don't we just head back?
Noda: Why do we have such scaredy-cats in our group?
Yuri: It's all because of you.
Yuri: But it seems that we've came quite far down.
At what level are we now?
Chaa: The 27th level.
Yuri: Ahh... That's amazing ! I wonder why there's even such an underground tunnel here.
Hinata: God knows. But I guess that the boss should know the answer.
Page 10
Ooyama: But... If it's true that beating the boss means the end of this world... What should we do? We have not accomplished our goal yet!
Noda: Why can't we just beat the boss? That's the point of this game.
Hinata: Ahh.. It's about time to say (bottom) this is the Afterlife. We're here to take revenge against god.
Noda: Afterlife? Revenge against god...? What's this? That's such a complicated plot...
Yuri: Ah! I've forgotten to tell you. This is not a game.
Noda: Then... what is this world?
Yuri: It's the real world.
Page 11
Noda: Real world?! But... but aren't you my female lead?!
Yuri: Female lead? What's that? I'm the leader of this group, is there any problem?
Chaa: Plus she's my wife.
Page12
Noda: Wh...why...
Noda: I... I am not the male lead... Am I...?
Yuri: If you insist then you can be the supporting role!
(bottom) Yuri: Since we've became partners, you should stop ranting over such things.
Noda: Why am I... a supporting role...
Page13
Noda: I DO NOT WANT TO BE A SUPPORTING ROLE!!!!!!!!!!!
The rest: Huh
Chaa: Gone (left) He's gone.
Hinata: Should we go chase him?
Yuri (left): What are you saying?
Yuri: He should be a character designed to tell us about this underground boss!
Yuri: Let's get going!
Hianta: Wait!
Page14
Hinata: Are really moving? You're a really powerful Leader-sama.
Yuri: What..? (bottom) Do you have anything to say about that?
Hianta: Nothing... Just the same as usual...
Yuri (left): What's wrong? Ever since Chaa joined us you seem to have changed and kept on ranting! Haha!
Yuri: (right) Are you jealous? (left) Because Chaa mentioned that I'm his wife.
Page 15
Hinata: HUH??! NO WAY...
Chaa: Ah I see... Seems like I've interrupted the two of you, little boy. Sorry. I'll take note of it in the future.
Hinata: I've said it's not... (box) It's not like that...
Hinata: (box) It's not as simple like that...
Ooyama: Uh... Hey, why don't we take a break at this spot here now?
Hinata: (box) It's just that feeling...
Page 16
Hinata: (box) with Chaa around, it doesn't seem to matter if I'm around anymore...
Hinata (box; left of page) Why... am I thinking of such things?
Yuri: Your wife's an idiot!!
Hinata: (bottom right) Ah... Is this jealousy!?
Hinata: (top) No. No. This should be good news. It's like no one will follow any useless leader. (bottom) Just like last time, for that reason it's enough for us to form a team.
Page 17
Hinata: (box) There seems to be no problem in this team.. I should be happy about it. I should just ignore all my emotions.
Hinata: Just like that...
Hinata: is it ok..?
Hinata: It just doesn't feel right... Are there really no problems at all?!
Hinata: That's it! We just had a team mate running away crying!!
Noda: Wa~~ ahh~~~ ah~~~
Hinata: (top) After Chaa joined us and I became more and more silent (centre) This made Yurippe's decisions even stronger!!
Hinata: Hey Yurippe!!
Page 18
Hinata: Let's bring Noda back here!
Yuri: No...da?
Hinata: You've already forgotten your team mate's name!?
Yuri: Ah that guy... Forget it. It's been so long and we'll be wasting our time to find him.
Hinata: What are you saying? Aren't we a team? Should we really leave him alone here in this dark cave!?
Hinata: (right) He's must be feeling very lonely right now. Let's find him and bring him back. (Left) You're the leader, right!?
Spoiler for part2:
Page 19
Yuri: ...... Fine... Let's find him....
(Words above Chaa): You'll be packing up.
Chaa (left top): Let's split up then. Yurippe and I will find the boss (bottom) Ooyama and you will look for Noda.
Hinata(top): What?! How can you randomly decide on this!
Chaa (bottom): Oh. I'm sorry. You and Yurippe will head to the bottom, while Ooyama and I search for Noda.
Yuri: Why are you apologizing?
Chaa: It's my fault that I didn't think so far ahead.
Yuri: Hm.. Then? What do you plan to do, Hinata-kun?
Hinata: Eh?
Hinata: I...
Page 20
1st choice: Find Noda together with Ooyama
2nd choice: Head to the lowest level with Yurippe
3rd choice: Ask Yurippe to change clothes
(Right top) Uniform (the one with arrow) Bikini
Hinata: WHAT'S WITH THE THIRD CHOICE!?
Yuri: What now? Please make your choice!
Hinata: I've decided.
Hinata (right side of the box with Yuri): I'll go find the boss with Chaa. Yurippe and Ooyama will find Noda.
Yuri: HUH!? Why!?
Hinata (right side top): If what Noda said is true (bottom) The boss should be a really strong, right?
Hinata (left): If so, both Chaa and I should be facing the battle since we're the stronger ones.
Page 21
Yuri: No!! I'm the leader! I should defeat the boss!
Hinata: Are you a child!? Didn't I said that this is dangerous!?
Yuri (bottom of Hinata): All the more reason why I should go!
Chaa (right): Okay, okay. We understand. Leave Noda to this boy and me. (left) You and Yurippe should get going.
(word above Ooyama): Sigh
Ooyama (most left): We'll hurry and find him, then let's meet up with you guys as soon as possible.
Hinata: That's fine with me.......
Chaa (top): Alright, let's go, Ooyama.
Ooyama (bottom): Mm... Let's go.
Ooyama (right, above hinata): Hinata-kun!
Hinata (left, on Ooyama): Mm?
Page 22
Ooyama: Ahh... Cure poison!!
(words above Hinata): Again...?
Ooyama: This is my farewell gift! Nothing will stay in your way no matter what!
(words above Hinata): Thank you
Hinata: Did I get poisoned before this...?
Chaa: Stop playing around, let's go.
Ooyama: Yes yes. The two of you, be careful!
Hinata: We will. You guys too.
Yuri: Let's go.
Page 23
(Between them two): ......
(Right): ... Come to think of it, we have not been carrying out missions with just the two of us for a while...
(Left) Ah... You're right...
Yuri: Fighting with you seems to have been ages ago too.
Hinata: I only remember you beating me up....
Yuri (Right): Since you can't even win a girl in fighting... Are you super weak?
Yuri (Middle): I was even the one who beat Chaa. You only know how to fall from the roof top.
Hinata (Left): Don't be mistaken. I was kicked down by someone. Plus, I have not been serious before.
Page 24
Yuri (Right): When will you be serious?
Hinata (bottom): When...
Hinata (on Yuri): you are in danger...
Yuri (Most Right): But before that won't you be dead?
Yuri (2nd right): Please be serious if you face danger yourself.
Hinata (2nd Left): It's natural for me that I don't really get serious in doing things for myself.
Hinata (Left): But I guess it's good too.
Page 25
Hinata (right): I want to protect Yurippe!
Hinata (left): Even though you may not need me anymore.
Yuri: ? What did you just say?
Hinata (bottom): Ah.. You think too much...
Yuri: Oh, yeah!
Yuri (pinwheel image): Hinata-kun
Hinata (top): Ah, that's the pinwheel from a while ago.
Yuri: I'll lend it to you. You gotta help me keep it safe!
Page 26
Yuri: This thing carries the will to live on.
Yuri (on Hinata): Don't even think of destroying it!
Hinata: .... Thank you.
Page 27
(Right): It's so spacious....
(Left): It feels different from the rest of the levels... It feels like we've reached the bottom.
Yuri: I agree. There's a final boss feeling around.
Hinata: We have to be extremely careful from now on...
Yuri: YAHOO!!
Hinata: Eh eh eh?!
Hinata (top): What are you doing!! The final boss will know we're here!!
Yuri (Bottom): I say, the final boss won't move and he will remain seated on his throne. He won't move unless he said his opening speech.
Page 28
Hinata: I don't think so...
Yuri: It's true!! All bosses are the same!!
Hinata: Fine. Fine.
(bottom) :.... It can't be...
Page 29
Yuri: Look over there!! She's seated!! Seated!!
Hinata: Oi oi... It's can't be. Is this person really the boss? She just looks like a normal girl.
Yuri: (top) You're dumb! The final boss will change her appearance a few times! This is the first appearance!!
(bottom): C'mon Final Boss! Begin your opening speech!!
Page 30
Shiina: ... Shallow-minded...
Yuri & Hinata: ......
Shiina: Come get me.
Yuri & Hinata: THAT'S TOO SHORT!!!
Page 31
Yuri (right): That's all? You're gonna be defeated by us, okay!?
Yuri (left): Aren't you gonna tell us any explanations or reasons or what?! Once you get beaten there won't be any chances of letting you go anymore!!
Hinata: Say it! Who are you!!
Hinata: What!? Where is she...
Page 32
Yuri: Don't you feel... It's getting bad?
Hinata: If this is a shonen manga... The bottom should have a "To Be Continued" right now, right?
(words become Hinata): To be continued in the September issue.
(Words all the way on the right, downwards): A final boss with the appearance of a high school girl... What's her power!? To be continued on the next chapter!!
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Last edited by Marcus H.; 2011-10-26 at 03:27.
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