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Old 2012-01-08, 05:11   Link #16110
tsunade666
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the phone! phone! cellphone or phone or at least a little info about how the heck Hamazura manage to skip the surveillance of Item or how can Touma leave Index behind.

You know this kind of writing change since the near the end of part 1 of Index. Around vol 20 with the WWIII skipping here and there. It looks good but the details was kept minimal. Heck even in the fight with Saronia. Kamachi didn't even give details to the surrounding or the distance between them. Which is unlike in his previews book. Which he least the distance or the setting of the battle field.

I don't know who to blame. The author or the editor. It felt a LOT of lacking -_-
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