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That's look quite interesting but with that many characters that's going to be a hassle to write.
Anyway I understood that Beth and Bernice are two twin sisters, but where did they come from? Maybe I missed it but I don't know how are they tied with the family, who are their parents?
Why didn't you give a spot to Nanjo's fabled granddaughter? Since you have that many characters you could add her as well... For example she could be Kinzo's sexy personal nurse or something.
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