Kneel Before Your King!
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: My kingdom
Age: 39
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Ah man... I would've had this up sooner, but I forgot to save what I had done and someone went and rebooted the computer. Sorry about that, I tried to replicate what was probably a much better synopsis/review/whatever as best I could, so hopefully you like what you see.
Anyway... even though this is the "Delicious M&M" portion, it's a very Sayaka-centric update, so I'd say it's time to once again Taste the Rainbow. Skittles Redux is a go!
(Translation: Enjoy a bunch of color jokes! )
Spoiler for Blue Evening:
So we start off with Mami delivering the bad news about what happened with Sayaka. Distraught, Madoka rushes to meet with Mami, so once again it's off to the Homu-Home to meet with a crippled Sayaka.
Regardless of how Madoka may have gotten here, she learns the truth about what's going to happen.
More to the point, a plan was concocted to explain Sayaka's injury without getting into the truth of the matter... and I hope that in this little enactment, Kyubey got to play the role of "wounded kitten." Only they actually put him into some of said machinery. Yeah, that'll make things better. Or maybe not, but it'll make me feel better. All things said though, the plan seemed to work... And unlike a certain other route, Nanami actually gets to play the role of kind and caring mother. Hopefully, for Sayaka's sake, Kotetsu still has a certain connection from that route open to him if magical means of healing are rendered out of the question...
But enough of referencing the more Sayaka-related route for this half, as this is the Mami Romance route. It would be a shame to not have a scene with that, and this update certainly didn't disappoint.
I'm going to break from my normal habits for this last portion, as I really don't think me giving a summary would do it any justice. Up until this point, I've viewed the relationship between Madoka and Mami in two different ways, the first being that of a younger girl who deeply admires her senpai and an older girl who wants a close friend, and the second being two girls who deeply love each other. In a single scene, you've managed to combine both of these into something truly magnificent, and as fond as I am of Sayaka, I'm honestly upset I didn't get to "officially" see this. Seriously, the end of this section is easily my favorite part of this update. Well done.
Spoiler for White Future:
So we start off with Mami delivering the surprising news about the latest magical gir... Human. Magical human, Kyousuke Kamijou, as well as the magic he worked for Sayaka. And, with their relationship soaring upwards to new heights, it seemed like it would soon be time for Mami to finally settle down with Madoka.
Later, in the Homu-Home, the magical maestro himself found himself surrounded by a quartet of lovely ladies. Why, he had a veritable harem on his hands with genki girl(and first girl) Sayaka, voluptuous senpai Mami, mysterious kuudere Homura and fiery tsundere Kyouko... who forgot to mention the fact that the Last Girl, which Kyouko would most likely be in this scenario, also tends to win. Of course, placements like that are irrelevant if the guy's already dating someone... and isn't named Makoto.
Afterwards, Kyousuke delivers a tale of miracles and magic so touching that even Homura was left in tears... and then everyone was brought to a chuckle when he boasted that, as harem lead, his being on their side assures victory. Though, seeing as he's already definitely gotten the girl, I'd say he's got reason to be confident.
Speaking of getting the girl, a brief interlude between Mami and a regretful Kyouko leads into a date between Mami and the harem lead she ended up with.
Either way, Madoka ends up quite exhausted due to her time with Mami, and hoping the dream life she shares with her beloved senpai and girlfriend never ends...
All in all, I enjoyed this update a lot. And I can't stress enough how magnificently done one portion in particular really was. Great work on this one, and I can't wait to see the next.
Oh, and sorry again if it's a bit later than you'd like. At least I didn't leave you hanging for a week this time around?
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