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Umm, I just skimmed through ur TL setsuna. I will omit the awkward grammatical usage for now. There is something I would like to point out.
The ship name is White Illuna.
The owner is Matvey.
The two port towns are Prepus and Lippner.
Also your writing about Prince Jermaine is so inconsistent.
Sry, for the criticism.
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