[Irenesharda]

Well, it's an interesting premise to begin with. We have two worlds that seem to exist side by side but know nothing of each other. We have two MCs we are the same person but on opposite ends of the spectrum. One who is an underachiever and never wants to draw attention to himself, never wants to stir up trouble, and the other who is outgoing, an expert fighter, and accepts a challenge with ease.

Also, we have a little girl who is in trouble, who seems to be trying to send a message to Tohru, and she's always surrounded by ravens.

I know in Western culture, ravens usually symbolize death and foreboding, I'm not sure if they mean the same in Eastern culture?

But anyway, interesting start, we'll see where it goes.