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The Greater Evil
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Peeing on Stinku's Grave
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Meh another long night. Not offering another discussion, rather a prototype fic I made. I call it Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung (Wiederbelebung means revival in german [I think  ]) This happens after Traumend and it'll have some Manga twist in it, but alas it's only a prototype fic meaning it's highly likely that I may leave it to rot. Comments and Questions are welcomed.
Spoiler for Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung Prologue:
Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Prologue
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: No stealing my fic plzkthxbye
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Kirakishou’s Dream World, ever changing, ever unpredictable, one moment it was a garden fill with white roses then the next moment it became a cemetery, then it became a ruined city scarred by the battles of WW2 and the list goes on. Kirakishou stood still, staring through the environments as if she watching slide shows. Then all the plane shifting stopped and revealed the hospital. Not just any other hospital, Kirakishou stared at one particular window and saw a girl in a patient uniform on a bed singing a song while gothic winged doll sitting on the window. Kirakishou stared at the duo, particularly the winged doll before the scene of hospital began to collapse and swallowed by total darkness. Occurrence like this is very rare to Kirakishou; in fact it’s almost non existent. She turned around with a sadistic smile that could rival a psychopath and large cold eyes that could send chills to the spine as she greet the intruder, Barasuishou.
“It seems that I have a new playmate” A cold monotone voice exited Kirakishou’s mouth, maintaining her ‘psychotic’ expression.
“It seems that I have a new playmate” Replied Barasuishou, matching Kira’s face.
Kira: "Who might you be?"
Bara: "Who might you be?"
Kira: "I’m Rozen Maiden’s 7th doll, Kirakishou."
Bara: "Kirakishou…I’m my father’s finest masterpiece, Barasuishou."
Kira: *Eyes widen more* "Well then, since we’ve finished our introduction, shall we play?"
Bara: *Copy cat Kira* "Well then, since we’ve finished our introduction, shall we play?"
The darkness started to materialize, revealing a large ball room. Barasuishou wasted no time and launches a first strike unleashing her crystal geyser on Kirakishou but was dodged with relative ease. Barasuishou increased the frequency of her crystal attacks, Kirakishou’s evasion quickened however it seems that the 7th Doll refused to attack and only concentrate on dodging and defense. As the duel heated up, Kirakishou still dodges but the ball room was filled with crystals movement became a serious issue. Barasuishou finally found an opportunity and launched one more crystal geyser; with no room to evade Kirakishou received the attack, followed by another crystals geyser and another until Kirakishou fell to the ground where Barasuishou stood, holding her crystal sword.
“Checkmate.” Said Barasuishou as she readied her sword, about to perform the finishing strike on the beaten Kirakishou. That was when Kirakishou grab Barasuishou by the leg.
“Checkmate.” With that, Kirakishou released her hand off Bara’s leg. Out of nowhere thorny rose vines burst out from the ground where Barasuishou stood, piecing her all over. Kirakishou stood up to see the motionless doll cover with vines, giving off the same psycho expression when she greeted Barasuishou when she was still ‘alive’. Kira then noticed that all the crystals Bara used to attack Kira slowly disappears, revealing another Barasuishou. However this time it isn’t just one, but 6 Barasuishou standing in front of her.
“More playmates” Kira’s smile widens and began to attack.
??? : "Kirakishou, that’s enough."
Kira halted her action and turned to the direction of where the familiar voice came from; Shirosaki, or better known as the Demon of Lapace. Behind him was the man who is responsible for the creation of Barasuishou and Rozen’s student, Enju, who’s pressing a knife on Shirosaki’s back but was careful not to stab him.
Shirosaki: *smiles* "My my, it’s been a long time Enju. I’m rather surprise that you would visit me and Kirakishou in the House of Asylum. But I doubt you’re here just to have a nice chit-chat, so what brings you here?"
Enju: "Revenge, on my Master, and his accursed dolls. And you are going to help me achieve that."
Shirosaki: *faking shock while smiling* "Oh my, but my dear Kirakishou is also one of Sir Rozen’s creations."
Enju: *evil doer smile* "Not to worry, she’s useful to me, for now…"
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Meanwhile at the hospital, late at night.
Yume wa kaze
Hikari michibiku
Sora to kumo wo koete yuku
Anata no koe hibike…
Suigintou: *Felt a weird feeling* "Hmm?"
Megu: *Stops singing* "Suigintou, is anything wrong?"
Suigintou: *Shakes head as she answered flatly* "No, it’s nothing. Continue with the song…"
Megu looked at Suigintou for a few seconds, then breathed in
Shiawase to
Iya na omoide
Yasashii ima ga toozakaru
Shiawase no yoru tsuzuke…
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In the mysterious Dream World known as the Garden of Eden, where it was surrounded by lush greenery and beautiful flowers, on the center of Garden was a large bed surrounded by pearl like roses that gave off a diamond sparkle and a pavement that connects the bed to other parts of the garden. On the bed lay a young girl of the early 10s with long sliver hair wearing a white Victorian dress, starts to shaken. Her eyelids slowly open, revealing her glimmering violet pupils and she was greeted by birds, kittens, puppies and other animals as she sat up. Beside the animals, an elderly looking butler was beside the bed, bowing to the girl.
Butler: “Ojou-sama, you’re awake. I thought that only when the time is ripe….”
Girl: “Yes I know Lucifer, but I had this uneasy dream. But that’s not all can you feel it, the darkness?
Lucifer the Butler: “Yes Ojou-sama, I too had felt it right before you’re awake.”
Girl: “Then it’s troubling indeed. *Pause for a while* Let us go, I fear that is a sign of an omen”
Lucifer: “As you wish, Alice Ojou-sama.”
Meh now that I got this bloody thing out of my head, must...sleep.... >_<
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Last edited by Flo; 2006-07-18 at 09:30.
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