Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Lost
@Flo:
Nice, you really know how to built up the plot. Altho, Suiseiseki saying "DAMMIT!!" is kinda hard to believe  Also, I think that if Sui saw Bara holding her sister's case/body, she wouldnt stop to ask or talk ~ the image I got: Sui's eyes widen in fear, she screams and launches at Bara.
|
At one point I almost made Suiseiseki say, "F**K!" but it's a bad idea to begin with (and very un-Suiseiseki like) so "DAMMIT!" works the best IMO.
Then I tried "DAMMIT ~DESU!" but looks damn so weird I took the desu out.
The remaining of Chapter 1 is up. Enjoy.
EDIT: Decided to combine part 1 & 2 together and fixing my lousy english
EDIT2: Changed the joke ending to a darker one
Spoiler for Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung Chapter 1 Complete (Part 1 & 2):
Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Chapter 1
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: No stealing my fic plzkthxbye
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Sakurada Residents, late at night.
Just another night for Sakurada Jun and his porcelain freeloaders, it’s been 2 months since that fateful incident, which had cost Shinku, Suiseiseki and Kanaria (And maybe Suigintou) the lost of their 2 sisters, Hina Ichigo and Souseiseki. For 2 months Jun and gang are finding ways to revive them by searching their missing Rozen Mystical, Kashibawa Tomoe would also drop by to help out but so far no such luck.
But still they didn’t give up hope and life went on as usual, and sleep was no exception. Jun was on his bed while Shinku and the dolls were in their suitcases, the night was peaceful and quiet, until…
*Glass shattering*
The sound of broken glass woke Jun up but not entirely.
Jun: *Still half awake* *Yawn* “What happened….burglary?”
It was until something shit out of the bed that fully awaken Jun and enough racket to wake up the dolls.
Jun: *Stumble off the bed* “Wh-wh-what the heck?” *Wear his glasses and took a close look at the object* “Crystals?”
Shinku: *Opens her suitcase* “Jun! What’s going on?”
Suiseiseki: *Opens her suitcase* “Chibi Ningen it’s too noisy ~desu!”
???: “Sou…it’s too noisy……~desu…”
Jun and the dolls turned to where the voice came from and couldn’t believe their eyes.
Jun: “N-nani?”
Suiseiseki: “I-It’s impossible ~desu…”
Shinku: “Bara…suishou…”
Barasuishou stood at the broken window holding two suitcases; both belonging to Souseiseki and Hina Ichigo and with them inside.
Suiseiseki: *Noticed what Bara was holding* “Souseiseki…Chibi Ichigo?” *Angry* “What are you planning to do with them ~desu!!!!”
Barasuishou: *smirk* “A gift…to Otou-sama…”
Shinku: “Otou-sama? You mean Enju?”
Jun: “Enju?”
Barasuishou: "You won’t be needing them anymore…Soon, everything will end..."
Jun: "Everything will end? What do you mean by that?"
Without answering Jun's question Barasuishou flew off, along with Souseiseki and Hina Ichigo.
“Wait!” Shinku and Suiseiseki decided to gave chase but crystals sprouted out from the ground blocking all windows.
Suiseiseki: *Pissed* “Ugh!” *Summons her watering can* “OUT OF MY WAY ~DESU!” *Shoots water at the crystals*
Shinku: “Holie!” *Summons her sugar cane and slash at the crystals*
The two dolls manage to break the crystals but it was already too late. Barasuishou was nowhere to be found, and with that their sisters, Souseiseki and Hina Ichigo were taken away.
Suiseiseki: “Souseiseki….Chibi Ichigo……Tch...” *Threw her watering can in anger* “DAMMIT!”
Shinku: *Crutching her fists* “Barasuishou…”
Nori: *Enters Jun’s room in her underwear and carrying a broom* “Jun-kun, are you hurt?! What happened?!”
Jun: *Looked out at the broken window* "Hina Ichigo...Souseiseki..."
***
At the hospital Suigintou’s eyes opened, woke up sitting at her usual window spot by Megu’s bed. She felt uneasy as she woke up, as if suffered from a bad dream which she could not remember. The winged doll looked at her medium, whose sleeping soundly with her blanket barely covered her waist, then...
Megu: *sneeze*
Suigintou: *Sigh* “Baka…”
Suigintou pulled the blanket to cover up to the shoulders, convinced that the cool breeze woke that made the doll uneasy. Ever since the fake Alice Game incident Suigintou was repaired and remade, she was finally given an abdomen and the cracks behind her back were sealed. Never had she felt so relaxed for a very long time that she could just forget everything that had happened in the past.
Suigintou: *Whisper to herself* “The past…no, there’s something that must not be forgotten.” ‘Shinku…’
The mere thought of that name was always something to be frown upon, at least to Suigintou. No matter how hard she wanted to forgive and forget Shinku, the age old grudge inside her kept screaming…
‘Forgive and forget? Are you insane? Have you forgotten how much you had suffered because of her? Who was the one responsible for that cursed wings on your back? All your devotion and love towards Otou-sama, discarded and thrown away. It’s all because of Shi…’
Suigintou: *Hissed to herself, hands holding her head* “That’s enough! Shut up!”
Megu: Mmm…*Shifted her body a little to the side* Suigin…zzzz
Realized that she almost woke Megu, Suigintou thought it was best to let her sleep in peace and flew off so she could reorganize her thoughts elsewhere without disturbing the others.
With Megu’s companion left her side, Kirakishou emerged from hiding. She gazed at the sleeping girl with evil intent, knowing that killing her would mean a fatal blow to Suigintou physically and emotionally. Already thoughts of torturing Megu before giving her a slow and painful death in the worse possible manner flooded her mind. But she decided to leave Megu alone for now and return to her Dream World, already plotting how to make her introduction to the 1st doll, ‘interesting’.
***
Chapter 1 Ends
For the previous chapters
Prologue