Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Okay, Time to churn out another profile to be evaluated.
But please do mind me a bit- this is a rapid write up... and it's based on one of our Aces.
My very first villain profile:
The Inverse Ace of Aces / Black Mirror / 'Evil Dimensional Twin'
: Unknown, but most likely the same as Nanoha's
: Same as Nanoha
: Same as Nanoha
: Earth, unknown dimension.
: S (and at the time when Nanoha and the other were still ranked AAA+ and had not taken evaluation)
: The inverse of Nanoha's cheerful personality, often fatalistic, nihilistic and lacking mercy (esp one scene where Nanoha said she 'screwed up')- though Nanoha's courage and occasional recklessness is still there. And when not in battle, she is practically Nanoha.
: Head of a group known as the Dei`Ministra- group of wayward Dei-type warriors.
: Freezing Heart - Raising/Raging Heart's inverse.
: Intelligent device, ranged assault and bombardment.
: Raising/Raging Heart in Silver and Blue..
: Same as Nanoha's- but instead of the white major areas, it is black.
: Unknown. But since it is a mirror of RH, the forms RH does is also being done on FH, with some changes in naming convention.
Insel Mode: Accel mode equivalent for FH.
- Decelerate (De-cel) Shooter: Black Accel Shooter equivalent for Nonaha, though they can be more than the usual number of accel shots Nanoha can create each time- with the proper cartridge boosting, Nonaha can summon up to a hundred magic misssles, as compared to Nanoha's dozen or less.
Buster Mode: This form does not need any explanation.
-Divine Buster: A black colored version of Nanoha's trademark shot.
-De-cel Buster: A pulse version of the Divine Buster, with the movement capability of de-cel shooter as well.
-Lance Buster: an attack unique to FH, instead of firing a thick beam, the device shoots out a thin but sharp beam that enables Nonaha to slice and shoot at the same time.
Inverse Excelion: No need to explain as well.
-Singularity Breaker: the inverse of Starlight Breaker, but with almost the same process- gathering residual energy from attack leftovers- but in this case, also the 'negative energy' of the area- the more war torn the area, the greater- especially if previous wars were also fought in the area. this skill also has a phenomenal gathering rate, more than Nanoha can go during her SB charge- forcing our ace to go to her limit each time just to outpace the rival charging. In simple terms, when Nano and Nona go on a charge-off contest, Nona grabs more energy than Nano, thus weakening the SB, since it depends of the amount of energy it can accumulate.
-[Unknown Skill]: this skill is still in the works, due to the lack of info from the field.
She was once another Nanoha of a different plane, living a normal life and childhood- until one day, things began to go bad for her. She did discover magic and had a fun time a first, then Fate came and all the things our Nanoha had done, they had also done as well. But just as Nanoha was about to save Fate from her quickly vanishing foothold, an evil bolt of energy struck Fate, killing her. That is where our Ace and her negative mirror began thier separate ways. during the years that followed, she witnessed many deaths- the names of those who died not to be revealed- all of them she was about to save but that evil bolt always struck them and killed them. Filled with despair and sadness, she unwearingly played into the hands of the dimensional criminal Fangwang, brainwashing her and turning her into the 'Evil Mirror'- and was set loose upon the dimension our Nanoha lives, along with three wayward Dei warriors who swore loyalty to him known as the Dei`Ministra, in order to bring out the Master Sealed Device, The Divine Staff of Beginnings and Ends, Gospel- in order to, according to her, 'restart her life once more, to correct the wrong'. Her warriors attacked the aces first, allowing them to discover one of the key sealed devices, the goddess' sword Espadona- in the hands of a certain archeologist. When the Aces began to fight back after a few encounters, she stepped in and shocked them all. afterwards, it beacame a protracted battle between possession of the remaining unactivated sealed devices- also adding to the conflict were Midchildan goddesses and Ancient V/Belka Saint programs (each with an arc of thier own in alternates I). But the aces began to win back and finally discover the truth as to where Gospel is, who owns it currently, and the true origins of Nanoha's magical bloodline. Nonaha was defeated in the final battle between Nanoha and her Gospel Assisted RH. As she fell, she resigned her feelings and her fate to the darkness of death, until Nanoha caught her.
"You have walked a different path... you are not me anymore... you are yourself... so you must live! not just for your sake, but for the people who still love you for who you are..."
Those words were enough for Nonaha to stop her plans for taking the device, also breaking her bond with Fangwang. But to achieve that, they needed to activate all the sealed devices- and they did- now separating one from the other- one still the Nanoha that we know, and the other, no longer Nanoha, but an entirely different person, Nonaha- but still the Nanoha of her plane. In the end, she acquired Gospel- which was ironic since she was trying to take it, but instead, Nanoha gave it to her- and decided that the first step in atonement is to destroy the abomination that created her dark personality- Fangwang. She then sets off on her journey to find and destroy him- she entered as a dark Mid-type mage intent on destruction, she left as a pink-circled Dei-type warrior on the quest to being justice to the cosmos...
And that is not the end of it... Years later, she returns to Nanoha's dimension after hearing that Fangwang was spotted there- setting the pace for a much greater battle up ahead- the battle for the entire cosmos- which she becomes Hayate's second in command in the Cross Squad of the MD6/1X command- but that will be another time.
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