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Kyuuketsuki42221 · 2008-06-20, 17:43

i have one that i wrote at 4:00 A.M. on a night where i couldn't get to sleep. i was thinking of a friend of mine who is going through a hard time in his life,

this poem sums up his entire life.
warning though, my poems never have verse or rhyme, and are usually very short.
Here it is.
--
Aspirations

Look up at the sky ant try to reach it.
-they must think it looks like a dome, don't they?
No matter how much you reach or how high you go you'll never touch it.
-but people keep reaching upwards, so much so that the sky disappears, don't they?
But the sky is just made of air.
-so they touched it even before they started to reach, didn't they?
--
not very good is it, it has a very blunt meaning right on the surface, but a deeper meaning is in there somewhere. i guess you truely have to know my friend to understand it.

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Kyuuketsuki42221 Seen 379 Cat-Girl Ears Join Date: Jun 2008	i have one that i wrote at 4:00 A.M. on a night where i couldn't get to sleep. i was thinking of a friend of mine who is going through a hard time in his life, this poem sums up his entire life. warning though, my poems never have verse or rhyme, and are usually very short. Here it is. -- Aspirations Look up at the sky ant try to reach it. -they must think it looks like a dome, don't they? No matter how much you reach or how high you go you'll never touch it. -but people keep reaching upwards, so much so that the sky disappears, don't they? But the sky is just made of air. -so they touched it even before they started to reach, didn't they? -- not very good is it, it has a very blunt meaning right on the surface, but a deeper meaning is in there somewhere. i guess you truely have to know my friend to understand it. Last edited by Kyuuketsuki42221; 2008-06-20 at 19:41.