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Originally Posted by ganbaru
I reworked the text and the background, C&C are welcomes:
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Looks much better. Nothing to suggest right now. Great work!
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Originally Posted by nines
First time entering a SOTM, And this is a pretty odd style for me to try so. C&C is appreciated and highly needed lol. Heres my 2 bad versions x.x
Version 1
Version 2
As I said lol C&C is needed <.< they suck  |
For both versions: render blends well with the background and the colours go well with each other. Having said that, I'd go with version 1 because, to me, it v2 background is a bit too busy. I'd also recommend increasing the brightness of some details of your sig, so you contrast between light and dark to add greater depth - right now, all the elements have the same brightness; pick a focal point for your light source. Font doesn't go very well with the sig and the text can be better blended.
Despite the suggestions, it's a good sig over all, especially since it may be a new style for you. Don't be so harsh on yourself.
