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Originally Posted by Gin
1)Hi Langus! 
2) the link doesn't work
3)put the document in the first post so its easy to find.
Is this just Bleach without pictures? Way to take the one redeeming aspect of Bleach and throw it out the window, now you're just left with the 'plot'. |
2.) You're right; in my haste I accidentally gave you the URL instead of the actual link it provided. that should be fixed now. Try again, and if it doesn't work, I'll get right on that.
3.) Yes I can. Thank you for the suggestion
I've already made my case for the lack of pictures in my first post, and I do not repeat myself.
As for the plot, if you'd stop complaining like a kiddie over the "lack of pictures" and actually helped me fix the plot like I requested (also in my first post), there might not be anything to complain about.
The whole point of this novelization is to
fix the plot. That's where the line between a novelization and fanfiction will be walked carefully.
However, with your help, it's possible to do.
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Originally Posted by Gin
Its only fanfiction if a fan makes something new, this is just rehashed Bleach, without the pretty pictures of buxomly lasses to make up for the terrible storyline.
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Kudos. However, the "terrible storyline" part is what I intend to fix.