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>Kaoru Chujo
Yes, this is (I presume) the bare bones of the story, and I agree that this came across. But there are many important details that are missing, that would put the whole thing into context (and which are loads more interesting, at least to me). Normally I'm the first person who says "don't think, feel!" and "don't sweat the small stuff!" but there's a limit to everything...
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