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@ Rain - Same as yours except the creepiness of it is commented on by most characters and that some others think what he's doing is wrong. Other than that, I'm not sure what'll happen with her.
Side note - Do you mind if I make Kanzashi not as close to Kyuukai as she was in HOTM? Irish hangs out with Tatenashi more and has more of a reason to befriend her than Kyuukai does.
@ Jak - Seems more like an epilogue to me.
@ Senpai - Does Rito's mom and dad act any different from their usual selves?
@ Senpai and Rain - Then what should I do? Having him say "I forgive you" is going to be anti-climactic and would look pretty OOC.
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