[Bananoha]

That doujin better be translated. I wouldn't mind editing if someone really was needed.

700 yen for that seems so.... cheap.... I feel bad for some reason.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Well now, this is a surprise. Two HayaFate's in a row.

requesting translation.

I can't read that last kanji.... anyone better at Japanese mind correcting me?

Spoiler for Incomplete translation:

Haya x Fa?

H : Fate-chan.
F : Hya!
F : Gee... Geez, Hayate...
H : Yes, yes. You've grown/filled in nicely.
N : What's this? [I don't know how to smoothly translate あれー....]
N : What are the two of you doing?
F : ......
F : Uhm, you see! This is [kanji I can't read]!

And a quickie....