Chapter 3 of "Love and Duty Come in Chains" is posted to Fanfiction.net.
In addition to the name changes isagrimorie pointed out, I also did a few more things.
Changes made:
1. Setsuna and Konoemon's conversation: As RB pointed out, Setsuna's response provokes a "want to slap her" response
, so I cut it out. The conversation I replaced it with was a scene I wanted to include in my first draft, but took out because it's a little confusing at this point in the story (but I put it back in since otherwise this whole scene becomes useless
).
2. Added one line to the end of the scene where Konoka and Kyo present to their families.
3. Setsuna and Shizuna's conversation: I inserted a few more lines of dialogue
...
I had considered writing "Chapter 4" directly at the end of Chapter 3, but who can resist that melodramatic cliff-hanger?