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Old 2006-07-01, 16:17   Link #3
Kiva128
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I think it's a good start. I like how the girl looks in the shot so good job on that. However, I think it's the background that needs improving. To me, I think the Earth doesn't blend in well with the bright speckled blue background. It also draws your attention away from the girl which I think is what you wanted to be the main focal point. Perhaps if it was more black like space and the blue speckle thing was reduced, it would look better imo.

Also, the text used leaves a bit to be desired. It seems out of place compared to everything. It would look better in a corner or perhaps by your name.

Overall though, this is very good for a first wallpaper.
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