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Originally Posted by Dengar
But... They told us how they met like 10 seconds into the episode. So we already know.
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So I assume you know from the anime alone why kirito was doing there? Was Kirito looking for people? Materials? Having a weird backwards trip or anything?
Surely the answer was found in this thread, but in the given episode? nope, not at all.
Again, you don't need "all the tidbits information" spoonfed to the audience. What you need is how the scenes are stuck together in a correct flow to have a proper narration. Simply having 1 liner to set the context is quite poor, especially in an anime format.
There is a fine difference between simple "ho by the way, we met him at X and Y" than really having like 20 seconds or a flashback sequence format.
Again, another problem of "show, don't tell". And it isn't like you need a full extra episode to tweek transitions between scenes, although I could picture these 2 stories into 2 full episodes instead.