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Old 2013-01-18, 11:24   Link #822
Konja7
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Originally Posted by Elestia View Post
The argument that Mahiro would have figured it out and Hakase would be saved without the help of Yoshino is really a stretch. Everything was a bit rushed and the flow of the story seems a bit more erratic with the plot jumping all over the place. I guess it's because we aren't solely focused on Yoshino and Mahiro anymore. Things were a bit more coherent previously, but now the dialogue doesn't seem as sharp anymore.
I think a problem of this chapter is that together almost three chapters of the book.

The explanation seems logical, Mahiro could have gone with Hakaze or just having fired in retaliation (Hakaze would return to the current time).

Samon made the argument that the Three of Beginnings caused the death of Aika (that generated all the doubts of Mahiro), because he was cornered by Yoshino (and seemed that everything was in favor of Three of Beginnings).
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