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Old 2010-02-22, 14:48   Link #995
Nobodyman9
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: U.S.A.
Age: 35
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Originally Posted by Solstice Cross View Post
I say: Be happy Nobodyman updated his story. It's actually quite nice. Though the fourth chapter, 'Parting' felt abit strained, it was nevertheless detailed.
Strained, eh? What exactly do you mean? Don't worry, I'm not offended or upset or anything. I'll happily take any criticism, positive or negative, I just want to be sure what you mean. After all, I want to improve my work and write it the best way I can

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I personally would like to imagine a reconstructed Tokyo with more japan-esque traditions... Not Britannia's (The most tradition they've ever seen doing is wearing fancy, expensive stuff while having the numbers kiss their feet. -_-
Ah, you see the problem for me is I sometimes have trouble disassociating Japan from the technological, culturally-advanced giant it is in real life. Also, I figured since...

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But I can see your point.

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Anyway, wonderful. Though I figured it'd be something of a similiar nature.
Well, I'm glad you liked it any rate.
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