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2009-10-20, 15:35
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wandering-dreamer
reads too much
Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: you know that's a great question.....
I meant odd pacing as in we kinda cleared up that mini-arc involving the inspectors and then kinda launched into a new mini arc. They felt a little too disjointed, a little too separate to flow well in this chapter, all IMO of course.
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