Thread: Licensed Letter Bee/Tegami Bachi
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Old 2009-10-20, 15:35   Link #17
wandering-dreamer
reads too much
 
 
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I meant odd pacing as in we kinda cleared up that mini-arc involving the inspectors and then kinda launched into a new mini arc. They felt a little too disjointed, a little too separate to flow well in this chapter, all IMO of course.
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