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Originally Posted by FlareKnight
Well now things are moving along. You knew they were going to get shot down to a degree with their first manuscript. Still the criticism wasn't bad and should help them moving forward. Agree that Mashiro should make sure to add his opinion earlier. If there is anything up with the story it should be discussed before they go too far with it. Otherwise they are kind of just wasting their time.
Wow that seating arrangement at the end  . Sure might be easier to get the mail info now, though with those two it's going to be tough. Wonder how their year is going to go with them being so nervous beside each other. |
It's not easy taking criticism, and I'm sure Mashiro didn't want to be the one to criticize his story right off the bat. Letting the guy hear it himself from the editor, someone who really knows what he is talking about/is credible, will let him 'soften up' a bit or be more receptive to hearing feedback.