[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Stupid typos. If only Fanfiction.net was easier to alter stories after being posted >< I've had problems with "replacing" chapters with typo-free ones and ended up losing all reviews for that chapter and other random errors in it -.-

Currently I'm debating continuing from them waking up in the morning or if I want to skip about another week. I need time to pass by >< but I can't skip too much at once. They've known each other for about a month now. Fate's been crushing since day two, Nanoha is just now starting to get confused but hasn't realized anything yet.

Spoiler for thoughts on starting chapter VI, spoilers:

Continuing from the wake up will give more fluffy moments, and a funny moment where Nanoha finds something rather embarrassing for Fate in the dresser and ends up with a compromising position and Precia walking in on them. Mainly for laughs and putting Fate in a very embarrassing situation

Continuing new chapter from a few days down the line gives more time for feelings to settle and generally lets me get into the plot sooner instead of using 1k words on something that won't progress the storyline. Enter Nanoha's modeling tryouts and stuff.

I vote for the 'start from the wake up'.

Spoiler for spoiler about spoiler:

I'd just loooooooooooove to see Precia's reaction at finding those two dressed in only lingerie I can already imagine her teasing Fate until the latter puts a tomato to shame XD! (probably not gonna happen but w/e. Its fun to imagine )