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Originally Posted by Hisago
Yeah, I fixed the links.
There's also my current work in progress, Somnus, which is, not surprisingly, also Hanatarou-centric...
It's rather dark and sad but I've been trying my best to make it just angsty enough that it doesn't become annoying.
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"The wind was fierce at such an altitude. It clawed at their loose robes like something alive and malicious." I love this line - great visual imagery there. I like the fact that you decided to give the underdog some time in the spotlight. I'm all for bringing exposure to underrated characters
I only had time to read chapter one so far, but I will make a point to read the rest. And no worries, it isn't angsty to the point of annoying - just a good balance.