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Old 2008-09-05, 20:24   Link #27
Langus
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Japan/Canada
Age: 39
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Originally Posted by Hisago View Post
Yeah, I fixed the links.

There's also my current work in progress, Somnus, which is, not surprisingly, also Hanatarou-centric...
It's rather dark and sad but I've been trying my best to make it just angsty enough that it doesn't become annoying.
"The wind was fierce at such an altitude. It clawed at their loose robes like something alive and malicious." I love this line - great visual imagery there. I like the fact that you decided to give the underdog some time in the spotlight. I'm all for bringing exposure to underrated characters I only had time to read chapter one so far, but I will make a point to read the rest. And no worries, it isn't angsty to the point of annoying - just a good balance.
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