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kyon
1) to me, the narration failed. While it fits an usual narration, it doesn't really suit kyon, because you kinda don't really sense what kyons is feeling. and weirdly enough, i almost didn't feel any difference between the narration and "in anime" speeches.
2) WINS ! i really liked the narration (unlike the previous one, you do feel kyon's puzzled sensation, along with some boredom)
3) what the..? did he acted flat like that on purpose? -_-"
4) just like skane said... that guy spoke like... he was dramatic and even panicked (especially the "why?!" , while kyon is supposed to be puzzled, but annoyed, not stressed)
5) This is even worse... not only it doesn't fit kyon, but it's rather opposite to his manner of speaking.
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