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Old 2012-01-24, 11:03   Link #4158
Blue Pentacle
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Yes, with cape and all .


Still, yes, you do have a point and I may have gotten a little mixed up but I am happy you approve of the labeling approach.


In regards to the last issue of the story length, you would be right in that I did originally consider this as a very short story, and admittedly it does remain short too, though I initally considered this as a two part project. Upon reflection, I did decide to extend it to three, as it seemed more balanced and would allow me to tie things up without overly compacting part 2; considering that part 1 was quite short by past standards .


In all, I am glad we have, hopefully, resolved that and that you approve of the tale told, so far, but hopefully still feel free to critique things as they come .


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