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Old 2008-03-26, 19:44   Link #73
BearShare
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*Graphic Designer
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rhyel View Post
First Try.

I'll try to make this as productive as I can.

The orange bg is overpowering the whiteness of the render. I also don't think the bg necessarily fits. The text on the left is pretty unnoticeable so it would just be better to remove it of place it somewhere else. The lighting looks a bit strange but maybe that's just me.

Hope that helped.
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