Hey there Triple R! I read the scenarios over again and I now I know how to convey my thoughts and feedback to this update. Like usual I have some ClariS playing on my RoP, and now I'm ready to roll.
Current Madoka x Mami Scenario
Spoiler for "Uwakoi" Relationship Starts:
Madoka's secret relationship starts and its looks like she's gumdrops and rainbows about the whole idea. I really enjoy love triangles (Macross Frontier and Ef: Tales of Memories are awesome examples
) but if it's handled on a "
School Days" level, it could be messy -_-. Yes the sexy negligee that Homura was wearing and the "wild" night that they had, really made things interest, but my mind was replaying in my head "School Days Ending Approaching" for the past 30 minutes I've spent reading and going over this (and the whole update as well). I could be jumping the gun, but I was really mindful of the previous scenario, and the Madoka having the "
Makoto Itou" mentality and the tragic endings and dissolved friendships that was associated with it. Seriously Makoto drop dead, oh wait, you're already are...hahahaha, you fucking man whoring prick! Just thinking about his death (and the way it was initiated) really puts a smile on my face!
Ahem: Back to the topic...sorry about that.
Oh yes, it seems like Homura is following Mami's example with the "taking the lead" in the relationship, but a little bit more bolder, compared to Mami would was more subtle so to speak.
This scenario in general reminds me of a manga called "
Uwakoi". If you have time Triple R, read it and you'll see what I mean.
Spoiler for Potential Idol Mami:
For this all I can say is KYYYAAAHH, OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD, ClariS, I'm so in love with them (in a fan sense they're in high school afterall and I know better). This choice pick, oh my god, my mind was blowing a mile a minute because Mami and Madoka are ClariS fans (No surprise their because they sing the PMMM opening after all), and me picturing this...an idol Mami, dude, this is freaking awesome!!
It's was nice and sweet that Madoka is really supportive of Mami's dream and the time they played DDR together. I mean Mami does have the look, the grace, and the confidence of an idol and I could see that working and I think you written this knowing that as well. I really liked the song choice you picked "Drop" and it really fit the situation of two lovers dancing and having fun listening to an awesome and talented pop duo.
Mami's passion mixed with Madoka (I'm sure Sayaka's) support I can definitely see her winning the third spot with the duo. I mean if Alice represents the sun, and Clara the moon, I guess that makes Mami a bright and shiny star(s).
I really wonder if ClariS have a secret, maybe they are Magical Gir...No I can't say it. Sorry Triple R I can't contain my excitement.
As for Haruka Hirasawa and FaceType Moon I can't help but think of the Fate series and K-on. It's hard to keep track when you pay attention to so many anime corporations and anime over the years.
Phenomenal work on this scenario, I truly enjoyed reading it and I look forward to what going to happen next.
Current Madoka x Sayaka Scenario
So Hitomi has "certain family responsibilities" does it have to do with Kamijou...who knows.
Sayaka resolve to protect her relationship with Madoka was a bold and brave front that defines her characters. It also shows that even if the parents don't approve she'll keep going because she loves Madoka and wants to love and protect her. The dad will do his best to help, but Sayaka has made her resolve, firm and clear.
The sweets kiss at the park was really cute and heartwarming and this is the first time I've ever seen Sayaka be this bold before. I mean they're kissing in public and people watching, I mean Mami was never this bold, but Sayaka took it to a interesting and unique level. I guess it shows her love in a new and indifferent way because of her desire to protect, comfort, and be attentive to the girl she loves.
At Mami's place or their "Fortress of Solitude" as I'd like to call it. They finally takes their relationship to the point of beyond intimacy and it's prove that the two have grown stronger despite the hassles the troubles that are coming their way, and it looks like there are more to come.
Mami and Kyoko's relationship seems to be improving, and Homura no more the wiser considering that she's doing what she can to prevent Madoka from becoming a magical girl. Looks the partnership is going well between the three, until this happen. So the Alliance Chain villain is making an appearance with Kyubey as a accomplice. No surprise there considering that the rat will use any means to get Madoka into a situation where she'll be forced to make a contract. I wonder how Mami, Kyoko, and Homura are going to handle this new threat, since they're saving their energy to beat Walpurgis Night. This is an interest turn of events, can't wait to see what happens.
I really look forward to see what's going to happen with these chain of events. Great read I really enjoyed it and the two pics were awesome.
Grading Time:
My fingers need to rest now, and I look forward to see what twists and surprises will come in the next update. Keep up the phenomenal, take your time, I'll be right here waiting!!