Kawahara got a couple of things right here; notwithstanding that Fluctlights are souls, to the average human they sound like robots, artificial intelligences, and given all the fears and duality of having to live side-by-side with intelligent technology, man's first thoughts are how he can control it first. ) : the reporters strike me as flat though.
After the acceleration was cancelled, were they sleeping or something?
" Alice’s eyes were moving like she was curing herself that her current body can’t cry in happiness." The 'curing' part is not making as much sense as something like 'reassuring' would have, is that what you meant?
Asuna just put a new spin on couple Diving
"What's left of Kirito's UW memory" were these parts that Higa didn't delete, or he simply blocked the memories?
PACKING YOURSELF INTO A BOX. This really got me here, and not just because of the seemingly impossibility of it. I swear there'll be doujinshi about this re-assembly process if Alicization is completely animated.
"Erudorie" I believe this was translated as Eldrie in V11.
I'm sorry Asuna, I'm starting to ship Alice and Kirito more than Asuna and Kirito.
Deus Ex Machina Level: Kayaba Akihiko. Seriously, that guy just doesn't die at all...