@zero: I suggest reading stuff other than LNs. Hunt down 100k word length stories in ff.net or fictionpress. They reach 100k for more than just sheer tenacity of the writers.
1st or 3rd person is fine. 1st person makes it easier because you imagine yourself in the character's position. 3rd person has multiple renditions and I'm only practicing one form thus far. It's mostly up to you.
I'll look through the draft tomorrow but you might not get a quick response since its only 3 days away from my exam week :|
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