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NERV Personnel
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Tokyo 3, Japan
Age: 38
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Originally Posted by Satashi
Spoiler for Present day.... Present time!.... AHAHAHAHA:
Okay, really, this is just a cute random moment.
"Oh come on, you'll like it." Nanoha pet her lap happily. "You'll beg me to do this for you later on, I promise." She was currently sitting on their extra large bed wearing her normal baggy night shirt and holding a long slender device in her hand that Fate didn't trust one bit. "You've been complaing about your ears for a week now."
"I don't like that thing," Fate crossed her arms over her chest after straightening one of the straps of her nightgown that fell over her shoulder. "Ears shouldn't be cleaned like that."
Nanoha looked at the stick like device with the small curve at the end. "Really? It's been part of Japanese culture for a long time now. Everyone enjoys this, mom used to do it to me when I was little just to make me sleep."
"....Gao...." Fate slowly gave in to the puppy dog eyes and laid her cheek on Nanoha's thigh, facing her stomach. "This won't hurt right?"
"Of course not." Nanoha moved away the mass of blond hair and placed the end of the wood onto Fate's ear. "Hold still." Nanoha stroked her hair and giggled. "Now I know how you felt when doing my eyebrows." Once Fate was calmed down enough Nanoha started to gently scrape the inside of Fate's ears, occasionally wiping off the tool with a paper towel. "See? Isn't this nice?"
"Not really." Fate squirmed. "I'm scared it will break in my ear."
"It won't break, you can bend it completely in half." Nanoha hummed to herself, smiling as Fate's legs kicked out and wiggled when she got to the insides of her ear. "Nya-haha."
"Grrr...."
"Did you just growl at me?"
"No." Fate gripped Nanoha's shirt and wiggled more. "That's still weird."
"Enjoy it." Nanoha purposely took her time and felt a small sense of pride when the blonde noticeably calmed down. "There, see?"
"Hm..."
"Other side." Nanoha let her turn over and re-adjust before going back to work. "You have cute ears."
"...Thank you?"
"You're welcome."
Fate closed her eyes and sighed out. "Okay... that feels nice."
"Trust me more."
"Last time you said that I found out what blindfolded love making was."
"Wasn't that great?"
"... Maybe." Fate felt herself start drifting off. "I prefer kissing more, though."
"When I'm done, I'll kiss you to your heart's desire."
"Promise?"
"Of course." Nanoha stroked her hair more. "Hey, Fate-chan?"
"Mmm....?"
"I love you."
She smiled. "You too."
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Cute moment is CUTE~~ 
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Originally Posted by SpaceBrotha
anyway, i went around and read the next batch of fics, this time by Evangelion Xgouki...
I'll try to avoid spoilers, and i remind again that this is merely a sort of commentary/summary with a bit of opinions thrown in for good measure 
Oh, and anyone who's about to read them, i suggest that you start with the last one in satashis list: "A magical christmas" and then the other two in what ever order you want 
So...
Spoiler for A magical christmas:
A daily routine (forwards going Ouch...), a daily meeting, and some festivity... a Lot of family bonding iced with some humour.
A lighthearted fic about vivios first christmas, and her introducion to the takamachi family, who reacted just about the way i imagined they would... 
Also, vivio got to meet arisa and suzuka, as did agito, who also met suzukas cats...
So, a slice of the aces life after strikers, and some festivity to top it off.
Spoiler for My master:
A unique monologue where raging heart tells history from her point of view...
I think Eva depicted RH's personality as well as it could be, considering that we know practically zilch about the device's personality... aside from loyalty.
It is also surprisingly touching to read some of the events that happened during the original serie, a's and strikers (also some in between and after the series) from RH's POV...
...and no, Eva didn't use the A's nano version of RH... though i think it would have served better, had the genre been humour
It's really hard to think up anything negative of the fics: the characters seem in character, the plot's easy to follow, descriptions are clear and abundant so you're never confused as to what's going on and there's just about no grammatical errors and only 2 typos that i found (but forgot by now  )...
...so, in one word: Solid.
Only thing that i've got against these fics is the length, as a fan of stories of truly EPIC proportions (in fanfiction, it would be daishi primes Deva serie, satashi's 6th div books, and nightengales saga of Saga), i was a bit disappointed at the short length of these fics... Especially considering the solid storytelling found in these fics. Well, my preferences can hardly be thought as a fault of the author
Anyways, hope to see more from you, Evangelion Xgouki |
Oh man, thanks for the reviews . I'm glad you enjoyed them since it's been over 5 years since I wrote a wrote a fanfic . I think My Master was the one I enjoyed the most writing since it's, currently, a one-of-a-kind fic. I honestly don't know how I came up with the concept, but I did and started typing away.
I know that they are a bit short, but I wrote these on some ideas that materialized in my possibly-sane brain. Personally I do wish I could make them longer, but they just turn out they way they do as I type away. I hope I actually get in a decent-sized fic at some point, but I just haven't have had any ideas for something of sufficient length .
*as urge to write another fic suddenly...*
Oh, and as much as I like RH in A's Nano, I don't think I'd be using that version in my fics...only in the omakes 
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Originally Posted by mercurianangel
Wootsauce!
Now I can post this~
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Wow...nice drawing . Wish I could draw like that so I could create a scene or two from my fics 
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