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Vexx · 2013-03-27, 21:14

This was amusing. I thought the comedy aspects were played well. Some awkward sentences and dialog but nothing a few more edit passes wouldn't fix.

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Vexx Obey the Darkly Cute ... Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: On the whole, I'd rather be in Kyoto ... Age: 66	This was amusing. I thought the comedy aspects were played well. Some awkward sentences and dialog but nothing a few more edit passes wouldn't fix. __________________ "It Really IS Rocket Science", Novel series rough drafts; vol. 1 thru vol. 3 complete Volume 4 in work, Visit the thread for short stories!