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Originally Posted by Satashi
Well, lots of requesting for Hayate and Fate in a relationship, so here's something I did for everyone.
WARNING: This is Fate x Hayate! Don't read if you don't like it!
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Not only Hayate x Fate, but some Yuunoha too. Great!
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Originally Posted by Laith
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Zaffoha? Give more!
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Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama
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What a twist! Still, all these devilish ways of thinking are fun to read!
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Originally Posted by wanwan1203
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Wohoooo!
Now let's work to double that number!
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
GO 500!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And for fun here's a short
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Took a while to realize just WHAT was going on, but the ending was sweet.
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Originally Posted by Laith
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I remember!
Just never realized so many things were written in 100 pages.
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Originally Posted by TerranReaper
Here is the second chapter of Alpha Outbreak. Hopefully it's better than the first.
Let the party begin.
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There some things that could use some working, although the premise is really interesting.
The thing that I found the worst was Nanoha joking about killing somebody (or was she being serious?). No. That's just a big 'no' coming from Nanoha. Besides the logic being flawed there: WHY kill him? There's also a few other things that raise question marks and could do with some working. Besides that, I think everybody else who comented covered the important things.
Oh, and I think I haven't welcomed you yet. Welcome to the thread.
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Originally Posted by Satashi
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Syn! People are kind of over reacting with the story though.
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Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama
I need to start wrapping up stories that are distracting me from my older stories, so here's another installment of Feito No Hana (the one that started with Nurse!Hayate)
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Oh wow!
The next chapter should be quite interesting.
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Originally Posted by AtomicoX
Fate of the Reapers
Chapter 9
Conversion
Picture inside spoiler, read to find out.
Spoiler for Author's note:
Pretty short chapter, but this series is coming to its ends. Chapter 10 and 11 will be longer (I hope) and the 11th will also be FINAL.
I shouldn't really post this but I need some opinions on this pic I made just now. It's a banner for the last chapter and I'm really satisfied with it. You might recognize where it's from...
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The story always somehow felt as if it would be longer, not ending in two chapters. Anyway - seems like everybody will have a surprise when they get to the base. What is going to happen to Fate? Also, nice banner!
Are my eyes fooling me, or is that part of Iron Man's eye from one of the movie posters?
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Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki
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A.
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