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Funnily enough, I wasn't the one who translated any of those sentences.
The light and darkness I agree with.
The second sentence is: yes, 'little affairs' referring to small things that happen between the students.
The third sentence is missing a copule, the sentence after that just sounds weird, but it isn't inherently wrong.
At any rate, one will inevitably mess things up when translating, so yes, editors are needed.
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