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Originally Posted by Marina
Yay! Great use of Daniel's work! I'm digging the colors and the style you have there, and I don't mind the quote in the top left, so I think you did a fine job implementing it without making it too difficult to read or stand out too much.
One thing I think would be nice to try out is a different color on that sword. I see what you're saying with using a sharp white from the grey, but what if it was more of a fiery color?
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I was in fact thinking about this, but I quickly scrapped the idea, as it would make the blade a bit too outstanding/out of context due the overly orange "domination".
Also, the biggest problem is how to associate it with a grey sword as it would take away its "sharpness".
And finally I wanted to use some "holy" to insist on the valkyrie nature.
I might try a blue energy aura or flame one, though I'm not so confident about what i can have with these... hummm ^^"
as for people who can't read completely the text, it reads as below:
"
O valkyrie of the doomed rebellion...
In the depths of despair, sing us to victory."
(no place for "- Nirvana, goddess of battle" though
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If only Yggdra could be that powerful to abuse of "Revolution" before the damn coronation ~~