i like your pictures, i wish to draw like you (because you draw it rigth), I don't know how to draw a straight line (i tell you every thing about my drawing skills saying that)
For me you pictures are very good, maybe it needs a little more to be perfect but i like it, and a little question:
from wich anime are this pictures? because i don't know
anyway, good luck on your future works of art and keep going.