Another small part of my fic's latest chapter,
still working on it, feedback would help at
this point so I can make the necessary changes.
Spoiler for Phase 4:
...
I met John during my first year at IS Academy,
a school that trains people to pilot the IS, a weapon
of mass destruction created by Doctor Shinonono,
but that’s not the point, you see, John was not a
student at IS Academy, instead he worked there, why
is it you ask?
Simple—
…men can’t use the IS.
Well, it’s not without exceptions, but he certainly
wasn’t one of them.
Before his arrival, embarrassing as it is, I was in love.
In love with a boy I had known years prior.
A boy that, in the past, would often eat at my home.
A boy that protected me.
A boy, that could not understand my feelings.
Still, I loved him.
A maiden’s heart is troublesome, no?
I think so too.
Though, it’s useless to pretend anything could be
done about it, that was just the way things turned out,
nothing special, that’s all.
Cheesy as it sounds, I’ll never forget the day John entered
our lives, no it wasn’t a grand entrance or anything, he
wasn’t even asked to introduce himself, after all, he wasn’t a
student.
...
Well, I guess I should say, even though this
is my self-insert challenge entry fic, unlike
the past chapters, this isn't written in my POV,
rather, from here on out it will be in Rin's POV
most of the time, the first 3 chapters you could
consider a prologue I guess, since this is where
the real story starts.
Btw, Chapter 4 is narrated by Rin years after the
story happened, hence why she sounds a bit more
mature than usual.