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Old 2011-10-02, 06:18   Link #2051
HasuMasu
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Another small part of my fic's latest chapter,
still working on it, feedback would help at
this point so I can make the necessary changes.

Spoiler for Phase 4:


Well, I guess I should say, even though this
is my self-insert challenge entry fic, unlike
the past chapters, this isn't written in my POV,
rather, from here on out it will be in Rin's POV
most of the time, the first 3 chapters you could
consider a prologue I guess, since this is where
the real story starts.


Btw, Chapter 4 is narrated by Rin years after the
story happened, hence why she sounds a bit more
mature than usual.
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