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Originally Posted by Solstice Cross
I say: Be happy Nobodyman updated his story. It's actually quite nice. Though the fourth chapter, 'Parting' felt abit strained, it was nevertheless detailed.
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Strained, eh? What exactly do you mean? Don't worry, I'm not offended or upset or anything. I'll happily take any criticism, positive or negative, I just want to be sure what you mean. After all, I want to improve my work and write it the best way I can
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I personally would like to imagine a reconstructed Tokyo with more japan-esque traditions... Not Britannia's (The most tradition they've ever seen doing is wearing fancy, expensive stuff while having the numbers kiss their feet. -_-
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Ah, you see the problem for me is I sometimes have trouble disassociating Japan from the technological, culturally-advanced giant it is in real life. Also, I figured since...
But I can see your point.
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Anyway, wonderful. Though I figured it'd be something of a similiar nature.
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Well, I'm glad you liked it any rate.