Hi, long time lurker(who loves quite a few Haruhi stories on FF.net.) first time poster.
I wrote my normal Haruhi fanfic not too long ago, and it seems that I haven't been able to get any reviews to my story.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6425105/...Myth_of_Nagato
It's a short story that involves Nagato and Tsuruya. I was hoping that maybe I got Tsuruya's character right in it.